Not bad. I like the idea of Ares having a child. I wonder who the mother is... if I recall, Ares only had eyes for Xena. I hope she doesn't always hate Hercules. I can see some friendship forming but it isn't my story... if it was, the story would never go anywhere. I get writer's block a lot... actually, my brain starts coming up with ideas for other stories in other genres.

I look forward to your next update.

PLEASE FINISH THIS!

i love it, please up date soon

EXELLENT please update!

please update

I am liking it so far. I like the fact that the dialogue sounds like it is coming out of the characters' mouths and you gave a pretty vivid description of what was happening. Keep it up! I'm interested to know what will happen next.

WOW that's great u hav 2 rite more

you need to write more and just to let you know ares never died

great first chapter! post more soon, sound like it's gonna be a neat story!