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icekrim91 6/22/09 . chapter 1
aw!that was touching and can't wait to read more from it
Naomi-imoaN 4/7/08 . chapter 1
Uwaah! T-T I loved it! It as beautifully written, and the fact that you didn't have them live happily ever after made it even BETTER. Continue writing more NejiHina; you're good at it!

Buh-bye now
janine 3/26/08 . chapter 1
T_T poor neji-niisan! I feel so bad for him:-( but this was a good STORY! NEJIHINA
poppy 2/8/08 . chapter 1
Aww, I just wanted to cry when it came to the last paragraph. Aw. Aw.
heavenlyhuntress 1/4/08 . chapter 1
sad! wish I could write as well as you (,"), here's a cookie! good job XD
talapadme 7/13/07 . chapter 1
AH! NO NO NO NONNonononononononono! Write sequel please please! oh pretty please! Let Hina-chan like him! So sad!

Lots of Love,

Talapadme
Merly 4/26/07 . chapter 1
AW! That was so sad, but I loved it, that really captured my heart. You should make a sequel it might be good! However you are the writer and respect every desicion you make, but I loved it! It was so beautiful! How sad for Neji to be rejected, aw!
Haruka 10/25/06 . chapter 1
AW so sweet but so sad! U CANT STOP THERE! U GOT TO FINISH IT!/CARRY ON WITH IT SO THAT THERES A HAPPY ENDING! *Tears in the eyes* i feel so sorry for neji *sob*

nejixhinata always :)
Windaerie 5/11/06 . chapter 1
GAH...

No!

So beautiful. Neiji x Hinata forever and ever.

Excellent job.
Tingmeow 2/10/06 . chapter 1
I was happy in the beginning but sad in the end. _ Come on, you can't leave Neji sad like this, please write a sequel. (this pairing of course)

For some reason I thought Hinata didn't truly love Naruto. It could be admire.
Sariachan-KokiriLeaf 1/8/06 . chapter 1
I like the way this story was written. It's very descriptive! :)

Anyway I don't like the pairing, but this isn't really important since it's a matter of taste at the end. Unfortunately, writing this pairing makes Neji OOC almost all the times. For example, the fact that he's jealous of Naruto while in the manga he admires him.

Furthermore, the canon Neji seems a person only dedicated on perfectioning (sp?) his fighting abilities, and he is one of those few characters in Naruto who fights for the fighting itself.

Maybe later in the manga, he will show the will to protect the main family (and Hinata), but he hadn't yet (even if after his deafet during the Chuunin Exam he cares about her).

Anyway, your story was wort reading.
XBECKX 10/14/05 . chapter 1
Aw that is so sad, I feel real bad for Neji but then Hinata loves Naruto and we can;t change that.
Ari 8/26/05 . chapter 1
aww...this is cute, realy... :)
Kotali 8/17/05 . chapter 1
Ahh! **Flail-cry.** I ned more! So pretty! You must write more! Lots of pretties.

I lover you!
Yumeorb 7/13/05 . chapter 1
Poor Neji, but it was so sweet having him caring for Hinata. But shouldn't he call her "Hinata-sama"?
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