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brittney 10/8/10 . chapter 1
i cried when rishid died it was just sad!ok dont judge me!
Pheonix09 9/2/10 . chapter 1
That was awesome, I loved it and nice job on this
Mojobubbles Kamilah 2/5/04 . chapter 1
Mojobubbles: ...I'm rereading this 'cause I need sibling fluff. I've not been a very happy person as of late. *reading* ...O_O KAMI-CHAN! HELLSPAWN IS TORMENTING MALIK! *cries*
Kamilah: *hug*
Mojobubbles: *sob* I want Hellspawn to go away...He can't make her hurt anyone...
Kamilah: Hellspawn is the voice inside the head of a very close friend of ours. And he's like Yami Malik/this devil thingy.
Mojobubbles: *shniffle* I'm going off now...
Twilight Feather 10/14/03 . chapter 1
Awsome story!Your in my faves _
Chaos 9/1/03 . chapter 1
Hm . . .. **stroking chin and nodding thoughtfully** Interesting . . . . . very interesting . . .

XD Aw heck . . . who am I kiddin'!

LUVED IT!
SashaFan9278 JPJr 9/1/03 . chapter 1
Another cool story! :) Very exciting and intriguing. I especially like the use of the song. Please write more like this! :)
darkangal322 8/31/03 . chapter 1
that was really good
Marik Ishtar 8/31/03 . chapter 1
Great story!

Keep it up
Chibi Cheesecake 8/31/03 . chapter 1
Mojobubbles: o.o Sibling fluff and...Linkin Park...? o.o YEAAH! Two of my favorite things.

Kamilah: yay, sibling-fluff.

Yami B: I bet they're gonna find some way to compare this to that movie from last night...

Mojobubbles: Hey, 'Grave of the Fireflies' ROCKED!

Yami B: Feh.

Kamilah: Don't pretend I didn't see you crying when all the little Setsukos were running around!

Yami B: ...I WAS NOT CRYING! I TOLD YOU, MY ALLERGIES WERE ACTING UP!

Mojobubbles: *sniggers and begins reading* NIGHTMARES! o.o

Kamilah: AWW! Rishid loves his brother.

Mojobubbles: Aw, poor Malik. I REMEMBER THE LIGHTNING!

Yami B: Well, yeah...you don't really forget that kind of a moment...

Kamilah: BUHBUHBUM! Who is this evil...person...guy!

Mojobubbles: NUU! RISHID! o.o

Kamilah: BUHBUHBUM! HE'S DEAD! Which means he's coming back. _

Mojobubbles: _ FLUUFFYY! *dances* OOh, I must figure out how to do that Grave-of-the-Fireflies-Malik-Isis fluffie!
Cleansweep11 8/31/03 . chapter 1
Ohh...I luv this fic. I agree, sibling cuteness rules! That was some bad dream-I mean, not bad dream, but event-that-actually-happened. Go Marik, go Marik!
Suuki 8/31/03 . chapter 1
;_; So sweet! XD I luv sibling stuff!
Adelianna 8/31/03 . chapter 1
_ You're right! Sibling cuteness rules the world. . . along with me! Mw ha ha ha ha ha! Anyway, another great ficcie. I liked the RP also that we did. :D Of course the demon was originally supposed to be an alien, and a humorous one at that. _ I liked how it transformed into drama and angst, though. Well, keep up the excellent work. Ja ne!

**Adelianna
fairywings81 8/31/03 . chapter 1
That was unbelieveable. It had me in tears. I can't wait until your next project!
The-Wicked-Have-More-Fun 8/31/03 . chapter 1
OH! That was so sweet! You know, in your fics, Daisy, Marik, Rishid, and Ishizu sort of remind me of Sandy, Suzy and Sonic. Anyway, I love sibling cuteness! .
Kerigan 8/31/03 . chapter 1
OMG, that was so sad! Your such a good writer! I'm jealous!
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