 Sorrow 5/6/02 . chapter 1OH DAMN! THIS IS A TIGHT ASS FIC! I HOPE U CAN MAKE A SEQUAL TO IT OR SOMETHIN! THAT WOULD BE COOL! I MEEN...THIS IS REALLY SOME DEEP SHIT. AND I LUV EVERY BIT OF IT! |
 Ami 1/1/02 . chapter 1 This wasn't the usual sort of thing but it was interesting. |
 rokjai 6/4/01 . chapter 1 i love her train of thought.hehehehehe... |
 Rashaka 4/18/01 . chapter 1Ouch. That's so mean. Duo's my fav character on GW, but I'm not going to flame you or anything because this is a yaoi fic and I understand the bashing in it for that reason. I'm indifferent on 3x4 fics, but I'm not a 1x2 fan AT ALL. Still, it was harsh. Deservedly so though, since they did it while they were both married. Mostly I feel sorry for the kid though, because he's going to be raised to hate his father. I can't really identify with Hilde in this because I haven't been there, but as a young woman I understand, and I know I'd feel the same in her situation, even though I might not act as vindictively. But I think this is good, because, for one, Hilde wins, not the perfect-at-everything gundam pilots. Two, I don't think enough people write about Hilde or Relena in a positive way when they're suffering because of a 1x2 relationship. Usually people just make them ditzes or es. I thought the way you wrote Relena was both IC and OOC, because on teh one hand she is very forgiving, but on the other she is stubborn as hell and not at all the lay-down-and-take-the-punishment type. Anyway, this was well done. I can't say I'm happy after reading it, but that's understandable taking the kind of story that it is. And you *did* say it was a revenge fic in the summary. |
 Arielle 2/3/01 . chapter 1 I loved this story! I have always thought that the one's where the girls just kill themselves are stupid. This actually gave the entire situation depth. |
 Figgy 12/30/00 . chapter 1 * whoops and cheers * That was great! I've never read a fic like this and I thought it was a wonderful, original difference! Usually it's Relena who is the angry ex, but Hilde was great in the role. She may have been a total , but I loved it-it fit the plot and she had every right to be pissed. Not even those Rel- -ex fics portrayed her as well as you did Hilde. _ Great fic. |
 Ezekiel Klitiras 12/27/00 . chapter 1I would have done the same if I were Hilde. But, oh so much worse, no one, NO one crosses me without suffering ten folds of what I have. Great story. Please write more. |
 Lady Scarlet-Une 12/26/00 . chapter 1*whistle* now that was bitter. the last part with solo made me wince. but i liked it. good job. _ |
 Ty 12/25/00 . chapter 1 You should make a sequal and have Duo commit suicide. |
 fhd 12/24/00 . chapter 1That was good and I like it considering I'm a Duo and Hilde fan |
 AznPnay 12/24/00 . chapter 1Oh wow, this is good! I feel sorry for Relena and ish, but she should have dun like Hilde. Haha, they deserved it. Especially when Solo sed, I Hate You! Haha, that is priceless. I love revenge. An eye for an eye and a tooth fer a tooth. Im definitely adding it as a favorite! |
 Jesse 12/24/00 . chapter 1 This was well-written, but don't you think you're exhibiting how YOU would act if this happened to you? |
 katie 12/23/00 . chapter 1 Hmm lets here it for the women in this one a nice change even though Hilde was something of a I'd say consodering the circumstance she had cause |
 mama-sama 12/23/00 . chapter 1 I actually think you did an excellent job on the anger HIlde would feel. Any woman who's ever be cheated on by someone they trusted would feel the same way! It is very good. |
 Dominique 12/23/00 . chapter 1 Oooh! WICKED! I LOVED it! This has got to be my favorite fic so far! It was excellent! Go Hilde! Make him suffer! The bastard! (I really do like Duo, but this was an exception.) Awesome! Heheheh! |