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| HighRoadS2 2008-01-03 ch 1,  | abuseWonderful story, I thouroghly enjoyed it. :) Would've liked to see them kiss, though ;) |
| juli 2005-08-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was ... WOW!it was very in character and COULD/SHOULD happen on the show Thanks for sharing this great fic with us! juli |
| Carbyluv 2004-10-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseMy oh my what an excellent story. I recommend this to anyone and everyone! I was glued to my computer--not even answering my phone! This story portrayed the characters perfectly. Even TPTB would be proud! This is definately a must read! The tension between the characters was so well written that it seemed tangible. And Grissom's and Sara's relationship couldn't have been done any better. I think I will have to lower my standards for the show after reading this fic. You could feel the emotions that the characters felt. Superb! |
| Tinuviel Undomiel 2004-08-13 ch 1, | abuseJerry Bruckheimer, Take notes, this story should be in the next season. |
| mira 2003-12-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really REALLY like your work. My only nitpicky thing is that you often have Sara and/or Catherine squealing. I think this is a bit OOC for them, and you're usually spot on. Also, your case files are some of the best I've read. INCLUDING the show. |
| Saskia Mitchell 2003-09-24 ch 1, | abuseI love that you know what a conundrum is. Also, I got an inordinate amount of pleasure from this line: "Ladies, your inordinate pleasure at disrupting the sleep of innocent citizens is disconcerting." Fanning myself again, lol. And now I'm staying up past my bedtime because your stories are so temptingly readable. Goodnight, Saskia-- |
| luxor 2003-09-03 ch 1, | abuseThis was simply wonderful story. At the risk of sounding like a broken record, you are a terrific writer. I am amazed at how fast you turn out all of these incredible stories ... I look forward to each and every one. I loved this storyline--I can see Grissom and Catherine coming to blows like this ... the twists and turns of the investigation were very realistic ... and the pace of G & S's personal relationship also very believable. Although I would have liked to see what "happened"! :-) Super job. Can't wait for the next Burked masterpiece. |
| k4e 2003-09-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was just...perfect. The characterizations, the theme, everything! Great job. |
| LSI 2003-09-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseBurked, another great story! It's amazing how you can put so many fabulous stories out so quickly. I can't wait to find out what you'll come up with next. ~LSI |
| bugface 2003-09-01 ch 1, | abuseplease keep writing! Excellent! |
| Peggie 2003-09-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseQuite different from your usual stories. But definitely as wonderful! Liked the interactions between Gil and Catherine and between Sara and Catherine. Thanks for sharing! |
| And Also With You 2003-08-31 ch 1, | abuseAh, another great one. Excellent case details. Loved the desert metaphor--I'm just certain that's the only way Grissom would ever talk about his feelings. I love the exchange in the car between them all (when Catherine and Sara claim to be ** in front of Grissom). Quite humorous. |
| El 2003-08-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseJust grinning away happily right now. Nothing constructive to say. I'm sure it will come in time though... |
| Lisa 2003-08-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was phenomenal! I'm in awe of your talent. I can't wait for your next story! |
| Annie Lune 2003-08-31 ch 1, | abuseThat was an awesome story, and the case fit so seemingly perfect into it. The Grissom and Sara interaction was great; I totally loved every minuet of it. |