Not bad. Seemed a bit repetitive, but i guess the lyrics you were working with were too. Umm...maybe try to incorperate more of the song into the story (Is there more to the song...i don't even remember...)
Just another thought...why the sudden reversal in Caitie's attitude? Maybe stick something in there about that...and again, i know it's hard to do, because it may not follow the lyrics of the song.
Other than that...i don't have much to say...

(userz; Twilight Dancer, 2 lazy 2login)
kute stry, the end was a lil 2 sappy 4 my taste, and caitie aint really THAT sappy, uno?
a/w, nevertheless, nice stry!

Poor Caitie. Bad days suck. I usually get 'em on mondays-but that's my problem.
I love that song by Fuel, and I love the way you made Caitie's bad day follow the lyrics of the song. It's cool, and kinda art immitating art...or something...

so many great stories, not only buffy... slayer and hpotter! your such a good riter, tips, i need tips! lol

good..
but
i have a few suggestions...its a little bit unrealistic like...over 1 day you dont say 'had a bad day AGAIN' you would just write one note and say im having a bad day today..
and not that this is nessicarily a 'bad' thing, but the song is like...the STORY i mean it totally fits, and thats kind of what you want, i just think that you should change the story a little bit from the song
good though! i really liked it, just i thought some parts were a litl unrealistic-- but thats okay
good job!

I usully don't like song fics, but you did this one really well. I liked how you fit the lyrics into it. I hope you continue to write more fics, maybe even some longer ones. Good IAHB fics are scarce.

So sweet. Poor Caitie.

this is just so cute I guess. real cute. JAMIE ROCKS!

very good! me likes very much! =)

Very good! It was sweet! The song's good too my sister made me listen to it once.

I luv it ^_^ I luv that song, and I especially like the story you put to it :) The only thing I don't like is that the bold/itallics work for you and not me >.< lol, how on earth did you do it? What program did you use? And what did you save it as? AAhh! Help me and I'll give you an acorn! :P E-mail me at Bebopbountyhuntress@yahoo.com if you feel so inclined :P And great fic ^_^V