my god is this antsy!! it's awesome!!

though I'll admit, i don't really know who's with who, but i don't really care all that much .lol

...wtf!! where in hells name did the knife come from (paper falls on lap and is read) oh.k nevermide forgot that IT WAS Bakuras room we were talking about.lol ans yep, it is evil and twisted and i love it!!

Ah wicked!!Truly...the blood and soul idea was cool, and using blood in a painting makes for a really dark touch. Liked the slow (but not too slow!) development of Yugi with Bakura, Yugi's anger and 'falling' as well as Bakura's thoughts on 'mixing blood'...while his character was high half the time and it showed but still him being Bakura you know? the other half of the time he was dead on too! ^_^

The scenes are all brill...Yami in hospital, Yugi telling ryou to shut up, the swings, the paintings scenes, the scene int he basement (with and without Yami), Ryou intruding (CosE: yay GO Ryou!!
Yugi: HEY!!
CosE:What?! Without him ruining your chances with Yami you'd have not got with sexy Kura!
Yugi: Oh yeah :0...thanx Ryou! :P)

and well all of it! Paintings were all very descriptive and darkish. (Wonder if any could be done on deviantart?)
And the story was expressive, got the blood pumping, very cult-like (i like) and slightly disturbing (especially the first duo pai scene)(also like)...Loved it...Can't get ENOUGH of it!...and one of my absolute FAV pairings...so you can't go wrong REALLY *^_^*

Needless to say this was yummy...now all you need is some grammer modifications and its perfect :P

One thing though...what the drugs? You've not mention whether now that their no longer hurting (after admitting everything in the basement scene at least) whether their still getting or going to get high from it all??

OMG

I LOVE THIS STORY!

LOVE

IT!

It so amazing, the lemons, the painting..

the painting captured me...i think im going to use that...i got done with taht and i feel like i ran a five mile race!

Oh and the drugs!! Very good work on the drugs and the yugi with the drugs...

OMG I LOVE THIS STORY!!

Love,
Kuro-san
YourNowDevotedFanGirl

I love your story.Except for some spelling/typo errors,it is truely well writen. I like what you did with the charactors. I also very fond of the Yami Bakura/Yugi pairing. There are so few of them. If you write them, I'ld love to read them.

Nice story! Hard to find good BxY pairings. ^.~

i must say that i really LOVE this fic. it was wonderfull. i love dark fics, and happy endings. and this had both. i love the twists you gave it and the lemons were good too. i also love the way you portrayed bakura, he seemed so... i dont really know the perfect word to describe it. but i loved it and the way he saw his paintings. and that blood had the person;s soul in it. i thought that was really a nice way of looking at it. it had lots of things a darl fics should have, blood, cutting, rape, death. wonderfull i tell, wonderfull. im such a sadist. i love blood. and i just love the picture painted with blood. it just sounds so beautifull. i wonder if i should try that one day. *laughs* i probably wont do it, but i might consider it.

well anyway, i cant expesse enough how much i enjoyed reading this. everything about it was wonderfull, i just wish dark fics were easier to find.
i love this fic. thanks for writing it. ^ ^

Ja ne~

~ Kari ~

oh how i wish you'd write a sequal to this story. i absolotly love it!!

aw! that's so sad for Yugi!! >_< that's horribly sad ;_;

i love the plot of the story. Although the endings is more different then I thought it will be. I was expecting Yami dying and Ryou gets angry, kill Bakura, then Yugi freaks, at the end, he suicides. Ryou is all alone in the world with no love. NOW THAT'S DARK. =] [kinda]

Wow! This is an awsome story! Not only did you have my fav. paring, but you had it all angsty with a happy ending! You rock!

Oh My God. Oh My God. OMG! OMG! OMG! This is like the best story I have EVER read! Ok, I know this story has been out a while, but I just read it for the first time and I thought it was totally AWSOME! I love B/Y fics even if had to do with drugs and crap, still it's a great story! Man, (Or woman^_^) You've got some knack for writing!! Keep it up!!
FOXY ^_^

WOW. That's all I can say, except to apologize for not catching up with this story before this beautiful completion!
Again, I am AWE-STRUCK by the FANTASTIC display of ability and discription that can be gone into by one person! ^-^ It was all EXCELLENT, lemon included. Congrats on writing a WONDERFUL story that I shall have stuck in heart and mind for long times to come. I truly loved and cherished each chapter, and can only feel a deep sense of regret that I wasn't here for the development, but only the ending.
._. Well, it's going onto my favorites list! =D I LOVE IT!!
Always and forever,
~Talentless

WOW!
What a totally cool story! It was a little sad and Suspenseful but the ending was great! I really like your style of writing. Nice job!

A happy ending for all!