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| Author of Doom: Rin 2006-10-28 ch 1, | abuseOh! (claps hands in delight) I read Descent into Madness ages ago... but this is FAR more juicy! (rubs hands together and gets to work at readin') Yayness! |
| anaemicfaeries 2005-12-22 ch 1, | abuseMan oh man, what an excellent fic! We absolutely adore this story, and love to read it over and over. We just feel this is such a perfect take on Hiko as a kid-hahaha, it's just wonderful! ^_^ A delightful balance of humour, wisdom and sadness! Truly awesome fic! anameicfaeries |
| Warg 2005-12-14 ch 3, | abuseVery awesome Hiko fic, raised by nuns into endless arrogance and Vanity. Lol. I was a little confused by the 1 and only pupil thing but its clear enough by the author's note(chap 2). Just 1 thing to point out. It isn't supposed to be the Ama-ryu against Amar-ryu but Kuzu-Ryu against Ama-ryu, right? Hopw someone sees this review. Bye |
| charmed-sword 2005-12-07 ch 3, | abuseWhat a wonderful story! I truly enjoyed this, it had me cracking up the whole way through, and sniffling at the end. You capture the arrogance and self assuredness of a young Hiko so well! I would imagine him to be exactly like this, lol! and I really liked his Master- 'You will call me shishou!' hahaha, 'more like kidnapped..' ha ha! ^_^ I found it touching how he finally called Hiko 'shishou' at the very end when he learned his valuable lesson...*sniff* Can't wait to read more from you! |
| musicsage 2005-09-02 ch 3, | abusethis story is really, really great. i love your hilarious take on youngHiko and his Shishou, and the poignancy of the story as he learns his lessons. i also liked the irony in how the first time Hiko calls his master Shishou is after he has earned the right to call him otherwise. so sad... but it's a lovely tale, really. nice work!! =) |
| mirune keishiko 2005-04-06 ch 3, anon. | abuseawesome. kind of...weird in that it narrates a bit quickly, and sort of curtly, so to speak ^.^ but all the same, neato. and the humor was great. ^.~ |
| SaitouuRyuuji 2005-02-17 ch 3, | abuseWow that was awesome you had me at the edge of my seat, reading every word like my life depended on it. Like it was my favorite food. Wow is all I can say, um if you ever get time, I have a fanfic that I would like you to read. It is called Miburo Wolves. That would be awesome if you read it. It is about Saitou. Saitouu Ryuuji |
| Tastywheat 2005-02-17 ch 3, | abuseNice story! I think you captured Genji's youthful arrogance and impudence perfectly. Having him finally call Hiko Shishou upon his death is a very nice, although predictable, touch--the irony that Genji could finally call Hiko by name but chooses not too (finally learning the meaning of respect) was very touching. Only nitpicks are that it probably should've taken Genji more than 2 years to learn all of Hiten Mitsurugi, especially since he spent the first year having his mistakes corrected. Kenshin, a born genius in his own right, learned under Hiko for years (age 7ish to 13?) and didn't get to the Kuzu Ryu Sen before he ran away to fight during the Bakumatsu. Other than that, very amusing story. |
| omasuoniwabanshi 2005-01-19 ch 3, | abuseOnly a truly great author can make you laugh hysterically then cry in the same story. Bravo! Excellent job! Your story explains quite a lot about Hiko's character (spoiled rotten by adoring nuns would give anyone an over-inflated opinion of themselves!) The jokes he played on the 12th master Hiko were a hoot. The ending was necessary, but so sad. Thank you for a great story about the most lovable egomaniac in the Rurouni Kenshin universe. |
| Unseen Watcher 2004-12-18 ch 3, | abuseAh, very nice. An interesting glimpse into what Hiko might have been like. I liked 12 too. *sigh* oh well, if there is a Hiten Mitsurugi master gathering place in the afterlife, the sheer power of the arrogance level alone ought to keep back even the less cautious kami. *smirk* |
| Rebecca 2004-11-14 ch 3, anon. | abuseBravo! Bravo! That story was awesome! The ending was sad 'cause Genji killed Hiko, but I loved the story! It was very well written. |
| junyortrakr 2004-11-04 ch 3, | abuseYea, I suppose that's about how it would have gone. Too bad the cape didn't fit Kenshin properly. |
| Heather Logan 2004-09-21 ch 3, | abuseOh so good... hilarious and yet poignant. I loved what Hiko the 12th said: "What does it mean to win at kenjutsu? Kenjutsu is nothing more than the art of killing! To win means that you have killed! Never gloat over a victory, for a life is a life, no matter what the holder of that life is like!" |
| cattleaya 2004-06-17 ch 1, | abuse*sighs* i just saw episode 43... compared to genji, kenshin's great (he always was, but...^^) i don't want to spoil that episode for anyone, but this way of succesion was more like the one kenshin had than at first glance. anyways, this fanfic was the greatest! awesome job, and i'll def. be reading more^_^ |
| cattleaya 2004-06-15 ch 3, | abuse*breaks out laughing and chokes* haha! this was an awesome story! great work^_^ hiko is def. my all time favorite character in rk and so i really enjoyed it! |