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   xoraxox 9/8/03 . chapter 1... AWESOME! Like this, VERY awesome. ...True to the TPU, but it seems ... Joren! Knight! Love! Hate! Good job ... continue? ari |
| Evilstrawberry 9/7/03 . chapter 1 This is a good story...hm...you sort of mixed normal Joren with wacko-in-love-with-Kel Joren...very well too! Write More Soon! |
| an anonymous geek 9/5/03 . chapter 1 oh, i really like this! please keep going! |
| R.S.A 9/3/03 . chapter 1 It's good except for the oocness of Joren. I doubt he'd just one day explain his feelings without at least something forcing it out of him. Other than that it's good. "God Bless" -The Courteous Flamer- *Rose* |
| White Phoenix Erialis 9/3/03 . chapter 1 Your punctuation could do with a little more work, but this is good! A true Joren and Keladry, not very OOC. ) |
| Krysalis 9/2/03 . chapter 1 Nice, very nice. Please update soon, I'll be waiting for the next chapter. |
| Fugitive 9/2/03 . chapter 1 "Hate is love without affection." Oh, that is so cool! I love it! I love Joren! I love your story! |
| shadowcat15 9/2/03 . chapter 1 It's interesting. I think you're right about them being ooc but, seriously, how could it be a k/j fic if they weren't? -kitten |
| Rowana S 9/2/03 . chapter 1 This is good. Joren seems to be his usual self. |
| PsychoLioness 9/1/03 . chapter 1 Oh. Are you going to write more. It's cool. |
