Nice fic! But if you want to use Kang-Lin for Kourin, you should use Liu-Chuan for Ryuuen. But's it's so sad... Nuriko commits suicide.. :( I find it interesting that Miaka names her daughter Kang-Lin, especially since she's never met her before. Or is it because those two are the reincarnated forms of Nuriko and Kang-Lin? But I feel so sorry for Nuriko! T-T

Oh man... *sigh* That was so angst-ty...

aw how sad! poor miaka,hotohori, and nuriko!! but very good writing style as always! good job!

*cries* that was so sad! poor Nuriko! poor Miaka! you did a good job, though. that was the saddest thing i've ever read... *feels sorry for the people* and that was a good way to end it, too.

ja ne!
~Ayame~@

*sniffs* Sadness is not *sniff* in your resume... WAH! THAT WAS BEAUTIFULL! KEEP UP DA GOOD WORK!

omg! *cries* Thats so sad! Its great, but sad! Can't you write happy story? WAH! *sniff* Thank Suzaku Chiciri didn't die...wah! But Nuriko and Tamahome AND Hotohori...wah!

oh my gosh, everyone dies, how sad! maybe you should write shakeshear like stuff. thats what happens in those plays. oh, look, how fun! everyone is dropping dead!