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| Homestar-is-Delicious 2006-03-11 ch 5, | abuseYou said Erica's dad was the dean at Welton, yet in this chapter you said he died in an acident when she was 13. |
| Lady of Queenscove 2005-05-07 ch 2, | abuseIt would be a little more clear if you did paragraph breaks when a new person is talking. And would they really have a boy and girl rooming together?? Carpe diem! I liked how you fit that in... Cady |
| GaelicGal123 2004-12-31 ch 10, anon. | abuseplease...update, update, update, update, update, update, update, UPDATE! i love dalton too ;)i need more! c ya, gaelicgal123 |
| Indigo Spirit 2004-10-06 ch 11, | abuseWow, that was so amazing, and so very sad. I still sometimes cry even when I just think about Dead Poets Society. This story really goes well with the movie and it is so well written. |
| Nuwanda-is-all 2004-09-26 ch 11, | abuseAriel:Dude that was so totally awesome!!so touching-AW! Erin: We took turns reading this fabulous "play" by yourself. (For it is actually like 3:08 in the moring!!) But as I was saying before, This was totally amazing, and I enjoyed reading it. The way you portrayed Knox' personality, And Todd's.. Um.. well, I won't ruin it by telling the ending for those who haven't read it, Um.. yeah. POINT BEING, Blo0dy good show chap! |
| skybluepink 2004-09-05 ch 11, | abuseBeautiful... Absolutely beautiful... I was engrossed from start to finish. Don't add anymore, its perfect as it is. (And as a pretty hardcore Dalton fan myself, I really giggled when you mentioned how you'd almost sent him to YOUR room) |
| great! 2004-08-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseplease write more asap, I'm loving this story so much!1 |
| NadaZimri 2004-08-16 ch 10, | abuseWow...that was so...sad! Very good, but immensely sad. I loved it!! Update again soon. ~NadaZimri~ |
| LaurelCrowned1 2004-08-11 ch 10, | abuseinteresting. sad. but good. i like where you're going with this. VERY NICE. |
| LaurelCrowned1 2004-08-10 ch 9, | abuseinteresting. you've really got dalton down excellently. your enw characters are interesting, too. GOOD FOR YOU! *thumbs up* |
| VanillaSky 2004-08-05 ch 8, | abuseVery nicely done...oh dear, it's been almost a year since you've updated...well, if you don't I understand, but please reconsider. |
| NadaZimri 2004-05-20 ch 8, | abuseThis is the first Dead Poets Society fic I've read...and I hafta say...I love it!! The angst, the romance, the...poetry! *sigh* It's wonderful. Please do continue...and soon! ~NadaZimri~ |
| DreamerChick 2003-11-22 ch 3, | abuseOkay, I was re-reading this, and I still love it, but, b/c I am a picky, history nerd, especially over what is considered socially acceptable (this is nit picky, I know, it just drives me nuts)i have one problem: There are a few things that are fine by todays culture, i.e. girls wearing boxers, that wouldn't be tolerated in 1960. A few time mismatches are fine but wardrobe choices really stick in my mind. I know that was so nit-picky but i had to get that off my chest sorry |
| DreamerChick 2003-11-15 ch 8, | abuseYou have talent, you don't suck,and this is an amazing story. You have everyone's beloved Nuwanda down, I cracked up (inwardly, i'm up too late on a saturday-into sunday to crack up outwardly)when you had him assume that the one condition for getting along was sleeping together-that's our hornball Nuwanda You also have all the boys in there, and in charecter, and you don't just mention them in passing, and Knox as the more-or-less ''leader'' makes me happy (he's so cute) Erica's a little fire ball, Thank you very much, you've now inspired me to work on my own "girls-admited to Hell..er..Welton" and "Nuwanda re-admitted" fic I hope my review helps inspire you to continue, ASAP ^_^ |
| Sunamachi 2003-10-23 ch 3, | abusehi! it's me agin! am i annoying you? just a little correction. "I went to the woods because I wanted to live deliberatley. I wanted to lived deep and suck out all the marrow of life. To put to ROTE all that was not life And not when I had come to die Discover that I had not lived." that's all. :D |