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Homestar-is-Delicious
2006-03-11
ch 5,
abuseYou said Erica's dad was the dean at Welton, yet in this chapter you said he died in an acident when she was 13.
Lady of Queenscove
2005-05-07
ch 2,
abuseIt would be a little more clear if you did paragraph breaks when a new person is talking. And would they really have a boy and girl rooming together??

Carpe diem! I liked how you fit that in...

Cady
GaelicGal123
2004-12-31
ch 10, anon.
abuseplease...update, update, update, update, update, update, update, UPDATE! i love dalton too ;)i need more! c ya, gaelicgal123
Indigo Spirit
2004-10-06
ch 11,
abuseWow, that was so amazing, and so very sad. I still sometimes cry even when I just think about Dead Poets Society. This story really goes well with the movie and it is so well written.
Nuwanda-is-all
2004-09-26
ch 11,
abuseAriel:Dude that was so totally awesome!!so touching-AW!
Erin: We took turns reading this fabulous "play" by yourself. (For it is actually like 3:08 in the moring!!) But as I was saying before, This was totally amazing, and I enjoyed reading it. The way you portrayed Knox' personality, And Todd's.. Um.. well, I won't ruin it by telling the ending for those who haven't read it, Um.. yeah. POINT BEING, Blo0dy good show chap!
skybluepink
2004-09-05
ch 11,
abuseBeautiful...
Absolutely beautiful...

I was engrossed from start to finish.
Don't add anymore, its perfect as it is.

(And as a pretty hardcore Dalton fan myself, I really giggled when you mentioned how you'd almost sent him to YOUR room)
great!
2004-08-18
ch 1, anon.
abuseplease write more asap, I'm loving this story so much!1
NadaZimri
2004-08-16
ch 10,
abuseWow...that was so...sad! Very good, but immensely sad. I loved it!! Update again soon.

~NadaZimri~
LaurelCrowned1
2004-08-11
ch 10,
abuseinteresting. sad. but good. i like where you're going with this. VERY NICE.
LaurelCrowned1
2004-08-10
ch 9,
abuseinteresting. you've really got dalton down excellently. your enw characters are interesting, too. GOOD FOR YOU!
*thumbs up*
VanillaSky
2004-08-05
ch 8,
abuseVery nicely done...oh dear, it's been almost a year since you've updated...well, if you don't I understand, but please reconsider.
NadaZimri
2004-05-20
ch 8,
abuseThis is the first Dead Poets Society fic I've read...and I hafta say...I love it!! The angst, the romance, the...poetry! *sigh* It's wonderful. Please do continue...and soon!
~NadaZimri~
DreamerChick
2003-11-22
ch 3,
abuseOkay, I was re-reading this, and I still love it, but, b/c I am a picky, history nerd, especially over what is considered socially acceptable (this is nit picky, I know, it just drives me nuts)i have one problem: There are a few things that are fine by todays culture, i.e. girls wearing boxers, that wouldn't be tolerated in 1960. A few time mismatches are fine but wardrobe choices really stick in my mind.
I know that was so nit-picky but i had to get that off my chest
sorry
DreamerChick
2003-11-15
ch 8,
abuseYou have talent, you don't suck,and this is an amazing story.
You have everyone's beloved Nuwanda down, I cracked up (inwardly, i'm up too late on a saturday-into sunday to crack up outwardly)when you had him assume that the one condition for getting along was sleeping together-that's our hornball Nuwanda
You also have all the boys in there, and in charecter, and you don't just mention them in passing, and Knox as the more-or-less ''leader'' makes me happy (he's so cute)
Erica's a little fire ball,
Thank you very much, you've now inspired me to work on my own "girls-admited to Hell..er..Welton" and "Nuwanda re-admitted" fic
I hope my review helps inspire you to continue, ASAP ^_^
Sunamachi
2003-10-23
ch 3,
abusehi! it's me agin! am i annoying you? just a little correction.
"I went to the woods because I wanted to live deliberatley.
I wanted to lived deep and suck out all the marrow of life.
To put to ROTE all that was not life
And not when I had come to die
Discover that I had not lived."

that's all. :D
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