Don't be so modest! It was an excellent battle sequence. Jack is great as always! (:

Can't wait for more!

Oh, dear, looks like Will's little scheme went awry. I'd hate to see what his missus is going to say. It won't be pretty.

Great, as usual...
Jack " you completely deserved that!" HAHA! You own. Seriously.

Whahoo nice chapter update soon

SE

You've got some seriously good character development of Jack in here, especially in chapter 35. I started reading this around when there was 28 or so chaps, just remembered to see if there was more today, and I was not disappointed at all. Keep up the amazing work!!( I can definitely see Elizabeth and Ana leaving with Eowyn... especially after the drugging)

great story, Jack rocks, very well written, can't wait for the next chapter

wonderful chapter

great chapter

wonderful story, full of action and humor, love how you have Jack interact

great fight scenes, very well written

great story, very well written

great fight scenes

good fight scenes

great story

wonderful chapter, very humorous