Aw that was cute! Great job!

That was very cute! I don't know what you're talking about, I thought the characterizations were excellent, as far as I'm concerned that could have been a scene right out of the story (although Sasuke probably wouldn't have recognized Naruto as his precious person yet because frankly he's just not that smart). But I think this story is perfect. Thank you very much for writing it, and keep up the good work!

I agree, it's quite OOC, but I don't think anyone minds. ^^ And this, THIS line, just *made* the fic. I'm seriously in love with it, lol.

"He is the brilliant day to my deepest night, as Haku was the innocent angel to Zabuza’s bloodstained devil. I only hope, as I watch my most precious person, that our end can be as happy as theirs."

The first part [of the line, not the fic] sounded a little cliche to me...and then the innocent angel/bloodstained devil came up and I was like we...lol, and then I read that last line and it just did it for me. I love that so much. I'm glad someone realized that no, Zabuza and Haku's story wasn't a tragedy. It was *sad*, but the point is, they died knowing they cared about each other, and that was enough...they died loving each other, at least, that's what I think. ^^ The point is, Zabuza and Haku died *happy*.

Kudos! ^^

Aww. Tres tres adorable. I liked it mucho much. Good job!
*salute*

hey. Interesting. you could make a whole 'series', novel, story whatever you want to call it using this as a base. good work. characterization was a little bad but not totally horrible. who says you have to EXACTLY follow the anime anyway?

Well, I was feeling bored and decided to flip through my reviews to find author's who had logged in and read some of their stories. Hi! Guess who I picked first?
This was a nice piece. Me likes, me likes!
Kakashi and the reading-walking thing... I used to do that too, all the time, up until 10th grade (I started homeschooling then so now I do my reading sitting down.) I don't completely recall my "trick" for doing it safely (though I walk in a straighter line if I don't pay attention to my surroundings - I'm less clumsy walking around the house at night with the lights off than in the day) but I think you sort of take a slight notice of the surrounding of the area around the book edges and apply it to the space under your feet. Helps if you've got good depth perception. I don't remember how I did it so well with crowds. Nobody paid attention to me, so I had to work my way through them - they never parted for me. ^^; Ah well. Ooh, gotta go, I think it's time to pick up my sis.

I really liked it. ^^ It was a sweet one-shot, just a light hinting of shounen-ai, but just enough to make you 'aw.' I really enjoyed it, i loved Haku and SasuNaru stuff. ^^ ~ Bai ~

yeay!^-^ a quaint little sasunaru, please, i hope you write more in the future^_^

uh, I can't do constructive criticicism, heh... sorry, but I did like this, a lot ^_^
yeah, so helpful aren't I? v.v()

hey hey, I think this fic is great the way it is, umm, the chara still do have their original essence, esp naruto~!
umm, well since it is kinda a one-shot thing then it doesn't really need a deep plot does it? ^.^
Well, nice work n continue to write~!
Cya

The main question of this fic is 'What happened when Sasuke was unconcious?' You made Naruto blurt out the entire thing at one point. I think it would be better if you gave the answer in tiny bits so the readers can kinda digest it and don't get confused. apart from this, your fic was good so keep up the good work!!^_~

I liked it! kawaiiness!

aw... swet! XD Sasuke's super gorgeous, super-cool, super handsome!! i wouldn't mind if he's paired up to Naruto!! too bad they're not mine... T_T;
anyway, nice story, good job! =D write more, K?

midd

CUTE! The Haku was most definately one of my most favorite arcs! Great fic!

^_^ Very nice! Yeah, I always wondered how Sasuke would confront Naruto about the Haku incident. Please write more soon!

~fd97