Wonderful. Keep writing poetry; you have a gift.

wow i loved that write more like it it wasa cool

VERY nice. I really enjoyed that. I had to seach my brain for SAT vocabulary! :) I applaud your diction. I've always felt that Draco is hiding behind his facade - always felt that Harry is very in-tune with nuances like you pointed out. Very nice!

~Bobbin, smiling

this is good
could you please R&R my story?