 sugarandsalt 2008-11-15 . chapter 1Yet another wonderful installment! You're stories are all so funny!
D*ck-whipped. Gosh... |
 the-secret-i.livejournal.com 2008-02-24 . chapter 1 Ahahaha! This is so cute and hilarious. Ken is utterly lovable.
Seriously, poor Ueda, though. Dying an agonizingly slow and painful death, ignored and forced to witness a lovers' tiff. |
 mina 2007-01-28 . chapter 1 just passing thru the WK fandom and reading this story for about the 3rd time. then i looked thru to see wat review i had written in the past and turns out i never did :0 Amazing considering this is just the type of story i love and since ken was uke in it its all gravy man. sorry for not reviewing from all those years ago lol |
 Random Projects 2006-11-02 . chapter 1*can only laugh* It's too funny, damn you! Ken just brought this up in the most inappropriate (sp?) time/situation ever! Honestly, in the middle of a mission... and the target was groaning and dying in the background... lmao. It got funnier when Omi and Yohji joined in their -ahem- 'talk'. I can't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
PS. To Flamer,
...Just a thought, but why didn't you sign-in while posting this review? Are you worried that when the others check out your story, they'll find "misportrayed and unoriginally common" characters? Maybe so, maybe not... Besides, if you don't like the pairing, don't come **' to the author. Just stop reading it and/or don't review. People can like different things that you do, and the world doesn't revolve around you. |
 xdarkestXkissx 2005-11-25 . chapter 1*all she can do is laugh*
--Silver-angel |
 *Aka*Tsuki* 2005-10-07 . chapter 1 YAY!! That was nothing short of hillarious... ^_^ I'm so happy now that brightened up my day... well kind of... don't get a swelled head... |
 NekoAnime 2005-09-09 . chapter 1This was extremely funny to me. I had to keep biting my lip to keep from laughing out loud. *Shakes head at Ken* Bringing up such a topic at an inappropriate time. I kept feeling sorry for the guy that Ken had sliced. He took his frustration out on him. And through all that chaos he still didn't get his wicked way with Ran. ^^; Oh, well, maybe next time if he doesn't get so distracted. |
 SilverCrystal9 2005-08-07 . chapter 1Ah the question as old as time who gets to be on top and who is on bottom. I love this story it is so amusing and hot. |
 Mistress of Muses 2005-08-02 . chapter 1That was very amusing. At least Youji the uber-uke got to have his say. Highly entertaining. Ken has a talent for bringing some topics up at inappropriate times. |
 krad 2005-05-26 . chapter 1 *laughs*
Nice story! Very funny. =) |
 Throwerchick 2005-03-07 . chapter 1very clever..and well written. Everyone was in character, perfectly so... and I nearly laughed my ** off when omi got involved with the sex talk. |
 Zeto 2005-01-29 . chapter 1Lol, omg, you rock! This fic rocks! This was an *excellent* humor fic! ^_^ You make my day. |
 Seph Lorraine 2004-11-06 . chapter 1Ahaha!! That was fantastic! I'm so hapy I found this while looking back at olf fics from years past. Very, very good, methinks.
The dialogue caused much hilarity! I loved it! Everything was so witty, I have a headache from laughing so much. And the target was just groaning and dying in the background the entire time. XD !
I'm sorry Ken didn't get to be seme though. I am a big fan of the Seme!Ken, but I thought it all worked out well-enough anyway.
Much loved your fic. :) |
 Lust Shaker 2004-10-01 . chapter 1 You are so pathetically cute. First, that you like AyaxKen when they have no chemistry on screen and have the weakest relationshipin the whole series. Including Gluhen. And you are so typical, it makes me laugh. You say you like Ken, but you portray him as a whimpering, whimpy, submissive boy when you know that it's not true. And honey so to break you dirty bubble but you're not Ken. So besides the OOCness of him, which like all your other charcters are misportrayed and unoriginally common.
You seem so innocent, I hope this doesn't offend you too much. You are just one of many AxK fans that have no leg to stand on and infest these types of fanfic archives with your trite, frivolous, regurgited ideas and plots. Bye! |
 westkitsune 2004-09-26 . chapter 1Ah I enjoyed laughing and smirking and going "aaw" till the glorious end, love it!^^ |