That was a great story, but it made me cry! Acturally, I'm still crying
*tear tear, sniff sniff*:'(

Cool. I like it. Me going to read it over and over because me like it so much.

O.O Gosh... and I thought suicide never was in the minds of Pokemon... >.< YIPE!
One problem though, I got stuck between who's talking in some of the dialogue moments.
This story is pretty sad, especially when musically accompanied by Evanescence.
If 'Emotions Left Unspoken' was a composition work, I will give you an A2~!

Wow a perfect ending Night I really enjoyed it. It just makes you think about things on life. It's kind of hard to explian, but I really like this, and I thank you for taking the time for writing it since you do have a busy life with school. Anyway, a great ending to a great short story.

Nice work.

Great story!

Good chapter, but I had a difficult time trying to figure out which were the pokemon or the humans. I know I should know this by now, but I was a bit confused by the diffent points of views. Anyway your doing well, and I hope you will update soon.

Good story so far. To tell you the truth I am not too familar what the pokemons look like so I am just guessing there, but anyway the content of this story is great, and the potential plotline is there I just hope that you will carry on writing it.