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| Charcoal Cat 2005-04-24 ch 3, anon. | abuseThat was a great story, but it made me cry! Acturally, I'm still crying *tear tear, sniff sniff*:'( |
| EagleFox 2005-03-18 ch 3, anon. | abuseCool. I like it. Me going to read it over and over because me like it so much. |
| ShakirBBB 2004-02-10 ch 3,  | abuseO.O Gosh... and I thought suicide never was in the minds of Pokemon... >.< YIPE! One problem though, I got stuck between who's talking in some of the dialogue moments. This story is pretty sad, especially when musically accompanied by Evanescence. If 'Emotions Left Unspoken' was a composition work, I will give you an A2~! |
| Dragon Shi 2003-09-29 ch 3, | abuseWow a perfect ending Night I really enjoyed it. It just makes you think about things on life. It's kind of hard to explian, but I really like this, and I thank you for taking the time for writing it since you do have a busy life with school. Anyway, a great ending to a great short story. Nice work. |
| Kamaitachi 2003-09-14 ch 2, anon. | abuseGreat story! |
| Dragon Shi 2003-09-12 ch 2, | abuseGood chapter, but I had a difficult time trying to figure out which were the pokemon or the humans. I know I should know this by now, but I was a bit confused by the diffent points of views. Anyway your doing well, and I hope you will update soon. |
| Dragon Shi 2003-09-02 ch 1, | abuseGood story so far. To tell you the truth I am not too familar what the pokemons look like so I am just guessing there, but anyway the content of this story is great, and the potential plotline is there I just hope that you will carry on writing it. |