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| Cindy 2005-08-31 ch 39, anon. | abuseYou have not updated lately. Surely after 39 chapters you have not given up on this fic. Hope you update soon. |
| Cindy 2005-08-21 ch 39, anon. | abuseYou have not updated lately. Please could we have some more? You have so much done, don't stop now. ;-) |
| I LOVE STORIES 2005-03-29 ch 39, anon. | abuseI love your story! Please update soon! I can not wait! |
| Daughter of Olorin 2004-12-31 ch 39,  | abuseI’m so glad for Firiel that she met Gandalf and Pippin when they came into the city. Refresh me again—what exactly is it about Aragorn that makes her want to plot revenge on him? “But I hate small children, have always thought they should be locked up and not let out until they can make intelligent conversation”, etc. Interesting characterization and I think it suits her. I’m almost inclined to agree with the statement. I can’t wait for Firiel to meet Faramir and then to see how Imrahil treats her. Great stuff! |
| HeartBreakerWithAHeartofGol... 2004-11-28 ch 38, | abuseI have had a wonderful time reading your story and it is very unique. You can't find a good, original story in the Fanfic Universe so easily. Keep on writing! Lost Souls of the Angels |
| Daughter of Olorin 2004-11-08 ch 38, | abuse“Denethor’s cold wrath was like angry Boromir, squared |
| Daughter of Olorin 2004-11-08 ch 37, | abuse“Four, Firiel. One of four |
| Janet 2004-11-08 ch 37, anon. | abuseWhen Firiel and Eolas are mucking you say that after three stalls each that they had filled ten barrels. For one dirty stall it can take more than three barrels. But it sounds like these stalls are pretty small so your number could be okay. |
| Corny 2004-11-07 ch 2, anon. | abuseI have found reviews very helpful to me so I am planning on returning the favor to you. I will try to write comments about every chapter. For chapter 1: really good. I love the way you jump right into the story. |
| Hannah 2004-11-07 ch 36, anon. | abuseFiriel was SO not being sympathetic with Eowyn when she aksed about her dead parents. I wish she didn't because she got mad at Eowyn for asking about Boromir because he was dead. What gives her the right to ask about something that is obviously painful. She seems insensitive and a real brat. |
| Janet 2004-11-07 ch 30, anon. | abuseI noticed your note asking for advise and I thought I'd mention a thing you got wrong. The left hand doesn't go on the pommel, it holds the reins and the right hand goes on the pommel. Just trying to help. By the way, I love your story! |
| Daughter of Olorin 2004-11-05 ch 36, | abuseI like that you also include the allowance for Gondorion women to go to war also. “Good speech. |
| Otto's Goat 2004-11-02 ch 2, | abuseThis is well written and interesting... I can't finish the rest now, but I think I will eventually. Great job... |
| tracey 2004-11-01 ch 36, anon. | abusecould you give some hint where this is going? Because i just don't see it. It feels as if the story is dragging like you don't have any idea either. |
| Daughter of Olorin 2004-10-26 ch 35, | abuseGuess who took an even longer break? I couldn't help myself! I like that Firiel doesn’t want to be treated any different even though she was “married |