It's lovely and I think you've captured Aoshi perfectly.

What's ironic is that I haven't the words to convey how incredible this story is.

Perfect.

Ineffably perfect.

Thank you.

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Very very well done. You've got your characterisation down almost perfectly - Aoshi isn't one of those utterly silent characters that so many of us make him out to be; he talks, he answers, and he really doesn't spill his guts. But then - he does. Almost. Great work.
Misao is Misao - almost-but-not-quite mature, but it doesn't matter because she *knows*. And I love that the silences mean as much - perhaps more - as the words. (I sense a Pinter-esque pattern here ... but not quite!)
My favourite line in this was:
"He could tell her now, as he mentally traced the curve of her eyelashes against her cheek; he could use words to push her away from the brink of obsession with this man who had once been obsessed."
Obsession. It's such a critical theme, here ... for Aoshi, it's a very important consideration - how much is love, and how much is obsession?
Excellent fic, the ending happy without being trivial. Great work.

very well written...you caught their personalities perfectly...

WA~I! I loved it, I loved it, I loved it! Next to dementedchris, you are my favorite A/M oneshot writers. ^_^ Ah, so refreshing.

What a gift you have. I only hope you keep sharing it.

Thank you.

Aww, how kawaii! I love A/M fluff, and there isn't very much of it... ::sighs:: I loved this very much. Keep up the good work.

Rurouni Tsuki

that was amazing... so insightful, so wonderfully written. between the two pov's i didn't get confused... it was one of the most insightful and amazing pieces of writing i've every read... keep writing! it's a breathtaking short...

wow, that was great! poor Aoshi, if only he could speak his mind better. *sigh* if was kinda sad, and yet sorta happy at the same time. great job!

I'm duly impressed with this fic. It really touched me, something that doesn't happen very often. You certainly have a unique style of writing. I admire your work.