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| The Poor Poet 2008-07-28 ch 1, | abuseI promise you this, when I have children, I'll recite this every night. A wonderful job! |
| xBrownie 2008-04-17 ch 1, | abuseWoah that was awesome i love how it all just came together =D |
| Meghan 2008-01-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseBra-vo! I really liked it. It must have been hard to write! I like the end. |
| piewolvesandsuch 2007-06-15 ch 1, | abuseAww, so cute! Although I've got to admit Cubone's made me laugh in a morbid way--nothing sends a child off to dreamland faster than telling them their mother could die. But I'm jumping on the "Delila reading this to baby Ash" bandwagon! |
| Raichu 2006-10-28 ch 1, | abuseThat's so sweet. I loved it! |
| RyukoVulpix 2004-08-11 ch 1, | abuseYay! It's a poem! A poem about Pokémon! That rhymes! *giggles* I love this! I can just imagine Hanako saying it to Chibi Satoshi at bedtime! This was the cutest poem ever! -Ryuko |
| Jillie Rose 2004-05-09 ch 1, | abuseYup. Odd. But hey, funny. WHich is good *pathetic coughing* flu. Urgh. Anyway. Kinda cute rewally. Looks like it took ages. |
| GIR's Cupcake 2004-01-07 ch 1, | abuse*applauds* I LOVED that! (didn't quite enjoy the thing about rattatta eating all the grain.. ) It had nice rhythem, good flow, sounded very umm.. child-like. Two paws up! ^_^ |
| Cosmic Mewtwo 2003-09-13 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was cute. How do you make verything flow and rhyme so well? ^^ |
| Paladin Dragoon 2003-09-06 ch 1, | abuse*cheers* best piece of poetry I've ever seen! KUTGW! |
| Blackjack Gabbiani 2003-09-06 ch 1, | abuseAw! I love this! I can so totally see Delia reading it to Ash... |
| Anne 2003-09-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseAw, it so sweet! I especially like how you mixed various pokemon from Red/Blue, Gold/Silver and Ruby/Sapphire. Great poem, and a cute lullabye. |
| Kenny's Goddess 2003-09-04 ch 1, | abuseAw, I like it! =) I like your summary even better though...lol. XD |
| dnr928 2003-09-04 ch 1, | abuse(Falls off his rocker) Are you ABSOLUTELY SURE you are Pink Parka Girl? Very good, though today's day number 6 for me in school. Very good story. I expect to see better in other stories. |
| citrus luver 2003-09-03 ch 1, | abuseAw! That's so sweet! me like! |