I promise you this, when I have children, I'll recite this every night.
A wonderful job!

Woah that was awesome i love how it all just came together =D

Bra-vo! I really liked it. It must have been hard to write! I like the end.

Aww, so cute! Although I've got to admit Cubone's made me laugh in a morbid way--nothing sends a child off to dreamland faster than telling them their mother could die.

But I'm jumping on the "Delila reading this to baby Ash" bandwagon!

That's so sweet. I loved it!

Yay! It's a poem! A poem about Pokémon! That rhymes! *giggles* I love this! I can just imagine Hanako saying it to Chibi Satoshi at bedtime! This was the cutest poem ever!
-Ryuko

Yup. Odd. But hey, funny. WHich is good *pathetic coughing* flu. Urgh. Anyway. Kinda cute rewally. Looks like it took ages.

*applauds* I LOVED that! (didn't quite enjoy the thing about rattatta eating all the grain.. ) It had nice rhythem, good flow, sounded very umm.. child-like. Two paws up! ^_^

Wow, that was cute. How do you make verything flow and rhyme so well? ^^

*cheers* best piece of poetry I've ever seen! KUTGW!

Aw! I love this! I can so totally see Delia reading it to Ash...

Aw, it so sweet! I especially like how you mixed various pokemon from Red/Blue, Gold/Silver and Ruby/Sapphire. Great poem, and a cute lullabye.

Aw, I like it! =) I like your summary even better though...lol.

XD

(Falls off his rocker)

Are you ABSOLUTELY SURE you are Pink Parka Girl?

Very good, though today's day number 6 for me in school.

Very good story. I expect to see better in other stories.

Aw! That's so sweet! me like!