 The Poor Poet 2008-07-28 . chapter 1I promise you this, when I have children, I'll recite this every night.
A wonderful job! |
 xBrownie 2008-04-17 . chapter 1Woah that was awesome i love how it all just came together =D |
 Meghan 2008-01-02 . chapter 1 Bra-vo! I really liked it. It must have been hard to write! I like the end. |
 Hillside Dancing On 2007-06-15 . chapter 1Aww, so cute! Although I've got to admit Cubone's made me laugh in a morbid way--nothing sends a child off to dreamland faster than telling them their mother could die.
But I'm jumping on the "Delila reading this to baby Ash" bandwagon! |
 Raichu 2006-10-28 . chapter 1That's so sweet. I loved it! |
 RyukoVulpix 2004-08-11 . chapter 1Yay! It's a poem! A poem about Pokémon! That rhymes! *giggles* I love this! I can just imagine Hanako saying it to Chibi Satoshi at bedtime! This was the cutest poem ever!
-Ryuko |
 Jillie Rose 2004-05-09 . chapter 1Yup. Odd. But hey, funny. WHich is good *pathetic coughing* flu. Urgh. Anyway. Kinda cute rewally. Looks like it took ages. |
 GIR's Cupcake 2004-01-07 . chapter 1*applauds* I LOVED that! (didn't quite enjoy the thing about rattatta eating all the grain.. ) It had nice rhythem, good flow, sounded very umm.. child-like. Two paws up! ^_^ |
 Cosmic Mewtwo 2003-09-13 . chapter 1Wow, that was cute. How do you make verything flow and rhyme so well? ^^ |
 Paladin Dragoon 2003-09-06 . chapter 1*cheers* best piece of poetry I've ever seen! KUTGW! |
 Blackjack Gabbiani 2003-09-06 . chapter 1Aw! I love this! I can so totally see Delia reading it to Ash... |
 Anne 2003-09-05 . chapter 1 Aw, it so sweet! I especially like how you mixed various pokemon from Red/Blue, Gold/Silver and Ruby/Sapphire. Great poem, and a cute lullabye. |
 Kenny's Goddess 2003-09-04 . chapter 1Aw, I like it! =) I like your summary even better though...lol.
XD |
 dnr928 2003-09-04 . chapter 1(Falls off his rocker)
Are you ABSOLUTELY SURE you are Pink Parka Girl?
Very good, though today's day number 6 for me in school.
Very good story. I expect to see better in other stories. |
 citrus luver 2003-09-03 . chapter 1Aw! That's so sweet! me like! |