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| Oniongurl 2004-12-15 ch 1, | abuseThat poem was so beautiful and deeply moving. I would love to see more of your work. Keep it up Oniongurl P.S. I this the gut and girl could be Grissom and Catherine or it could be that Spiky hair lab guy and Sara. |
| Padfoot4ever 2004-09-13 ch 1, | abuseumm..very short..yes...but short and to the point..not tomention emotional...I loved it! |
| warricksgirl 2004-05-21 ch 1, | abuseaw...that was sad. i have a feeling it's greg and sara. they look cute together. |
| Dare-Sonar 2003-12-15 ch 1, | abuseWow. For something so short it sure was moving. *Dare-Sonar* |
| Elina 2003-09-07 ch 1, | abuseUm, that was... short. |
| Seraphsaiyan 2003-09-06 ch 1, | abuseWell...that was very very very short but also pretty good. Are you going to do a another chapter? I hope so. I'm gonna put this on my fav. list just in case. |
| possum feet 2003-09-06 ch 1, | abuseShort and sweet- well, bitter/sweet. I think that this is a G/C fic. I liked the last line... 'An angel in a lab coat.' :0) VG! Also loved the little thing at the end about the world ending. Australia RULES! |
| Arcablue 2003-09-02 ch 1, | abuseNot bad! A little short, but still really good! I can easily picture several scenarios for the story, it is great in the fact that one can put anyone in the posistions and well in general it is good! You could probably write several great CSI stories, assuming you knew something about forensics, now I know you probably don't care but the thing that bugs me the most with CSI fan-fics is that the people don't know squat about forensics! Well write more!! p.s. never try to count the minutae on your finger with a permanent pen... you'll be explaning why you have dots all over your fingers lots of times! ~from a real experience~ |