Brilliant, I had a dream of snape expressing these kinds of feelings, I really hope that he really feels like this. But do you think his "insultsa and ... glares will cease"?, I've always thought that he would do so in a more of an inner way, and I try to imagine how would hp feel if he ever found out...

That was beautiful. It almost made me cry. Harry has had such a rough time of things, it breaks my heart. I hate to see him suffer. I hope Rowlings will make life a bit easier on him in the future.

great poem;)

That was really good. I love poetry and usually I only like really, really depressing stuff, but this was real good.

Though I'm usually not much into poem, I really liked this one. So sweet, so sad. Really good!

This was good! I get a picture of Harry dying and Snape the only one there and they make peace and stuff! A Great mental image. You have real poetic talent!

I must say, you have talent, continue writing, you stuff is really good.

That was beautiful. Nothing more to say, really. Simply that I liked it. Well done.

Thank you.