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Miss.Amanda.Snicket-Redfiel...
2006-10-18
ch 2,
abuseTOO freaking fnny. i always wodered why mystique's costume had changed and NOW i have the answer! i agree, she looked terrible in that old hwite battledressblech! hated it!
Destiny13
2005-01-05
ch 2,
abuseto use stacey's words..."SHUT UP!"

this story made me laugh so hard!i'm so glad that i check out ppls other stories now!you never know when you'll find another one you like!

seriously though this story made me laugh so hard!it totally made my day!unfortunately i must return to my english and law essays...ah the joys of gr.12...but i digress.

awesome story,
megan
SociallyInept
2004-07-01
ch 2,
abuseI am seriously enjoying this. Well, maybe not seriously. Maybe some of the stuff is making me laugh my head off, but it's a good thing. I love reading funny things, and this is right up that alley. Please continue it. I wanna know what the Brotherhood think.
By the way, thanks for reviewing my story (Stars Sent Below).
Taineyah
2004-02-06
ch 2,
abuseGreat story! More!
Love,
Tainz
Cheesy Monkey (too lazy to ...
2003-11-22
ch 2, anon.
abuseHeheh. That was so perfect. I saw that show an hour or two ago. I don't know how I would feel if I was in that situation. A mixture between anger, resentment, excitement, and... that's it. I mean, I'd be angry about them telling me I dress horrible when they don't dress that great themselves, and also I wouldn't want them to throw away my clothes either. But then, a 50 dollar shopping spree might be worth it. *sigh* Oh right! I'm supposed to be talking about your fic. Whoops. I forgot. XD It was cool and funny. You should update this soon. Real soon. -Cheesy
The Hermione Granger Fan Cl...
2003-10-17
ch 2,
abuseHere I am again, at the public library, keeping up my 'Mystique's Mistake'-induced mantra of "Don'tgiggledon'tgiggledon'tgiggleFORTHELOVEOFGODDon'tgiggle!" And here I am again, preparing to review.

“My ass is enormous!” Mystique shrieked, in her usual commanding alto.

Oh my God, I couldn't stop laughing. That was brilliant.

And-

“Those MORONS!” she raged. “I am never going to forgive the Brotherhood for this! As soon as this nightmare is over, I will fling them out into the street! They mess up my HOUSE, they send me to these inarticulate HUMANS … I’ve lost my CLOTHES, my DIGNITY, indeed, my sense of self! And that is pretty tenuous to begin with, considering I can be anyone!”

The chapter title was cool too. I'm sorry I didn't review for ages, but I didn't notice that you had updated. Great chapter!
The Electric Russian
2003-10-06
ch 2,
abuseOh my god! That was freaking hystaricle! Please continue! I love it!
Freeverse
2003-09-22
ch 2,
abuseAn update! WHE! This is turning out to be my favorite story ever! I heart Mystique and I heart Wayne, too. I watched the show Friday night and the bastards replaced Wayne! What the hell?! UH- anyway, good job. MORE!
Jessi Tsuki
2003-09-17
ch 2,
abuseXD Keep writing!
Storm-Pietro
2003-09-16
ch 2,
abuseThat was terrific.
BAMFstoat
2003-09-15
ch 1, anon.
abuseyou could have those women from the uk version trinny and susanna who seem to feel the need to look at womens breasts and touch them all the time. Those two need sorting out. Urk. But that would be interesting.
Panther Nesmith
2003-09-14
ch 2,
abuseIt's only slander if a lawyer sees it! I say we kill 'em all! DIE EVIL PERSONALITY STEALERS! Ya know, if I were on that show I'd go to a thrift store and buy everything. Or I'd blow it all on one thing, like a really expensive peice of jewelry.

Anyway, very fun, but maybe Mystique should but heads with the hosts, to create a bit more humor. Just a thought! More soon!
RayvynS
2003-09-14
ch 2,
abuseI'm so glad I have you on author alert. Anyway, yep I'm counting this chapter as original too. I like part about what The Dress (heh caps definitely show importance)will do to Magneto. Finally, the white dress with skull thing is gone! Just one question..do they give the people a credit card AND 5K? Maybe I missed that ^_^
ribbetfrog
2003-09-10
ch 1,
abuseHeh, very interesting fanfic you have here. I've never seen one like this before, good job on coming up with a good idea. Continue!
The Hermione Granger Fan Cl...
2003-09-05
ch 1,
abuseAbsolutely hilarious. I was reading this in the public library and started cracking up. I had to bite on my fist to keep from laughing.

I liked the line "You BUFFOONS! How DARE you insult my sense of style!" For some strange reason I heard Mystqiue's voice in my head saying that line and laughed. I also liked Stacy, and the nightgown and things. Excellent stuff!
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