Reviews for Alternate Strings

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Drusilla Braun 2007-07-31 ch 19,	abuseThis is good I really enjoyed it. Great job.
Samantha Bridges 2004-07-27 ch 19,	abuseEat me later for not reviewing ina timely manner, let;s get to the meat. breathless, Kurt. I still contend you capture the Good Doctor like no one else can, and that you give so much life to your characters. Little Susie is as frightening in this setting as she is in any other. I'll agree with Clarice's suspicions that Hannibal is alive, and that Susie is as good as her mother and father at playing the game. ;)
scary miss mary 2004-05-13 ch 19,	abuseWow... I've spent hours reading this, and it completely blew me away. This fic and 'Daddy's Girl' are the best sequels to Hannibal I've come across. Your style is impeccable, characters in canon, although I admit I was somewhat perturbed at the absence of murder on Lecter's part. Okay, so he's eighty... but he's still Hannibal the Cannibal! The only slight flaw I found, not really a flaw at all, was Clarice's unrelenting persistance and determination. I felt that at times she was too harsh in her judgement of Lecter. However, saying that, her daughter had ran away, and she'd been brainwashed by him... Perhaps my judgement of Special Agent Starling has been clouded by the vast amount of sickeningly romantic Lecter/Clarice fics I've read. This is quite possible, although I much prefer a fic that has a complex plot to one that is just pure smush. Okay, I'm rambling, so I'm going to stop now. I just wanted you to know how much I sincerely loved your fic, and how much better it is than the rest of the crap out there on ff.net.
Jeril Dragonsoul 2004-01-25 ch 19,	abuseIt's done... and I still can't figure out if Dr. Lecter's dead or not. o.o Hm. Ah, well. Life's better with such mysteries hanging around. Wonderful fic. I love every word and suspenseful moment of it. ^_^ I cannot wait to read more of your work.
Jeril Dragonsoul 2004-01-25 ch 17,	abuseHow sad. Not much time left for dear Dr. Lecter. sniffles The world will be a much less interesting place without him, I must say. The nun and priest thing still has me laughing though. ^_^ Hehehe.
Shattered_Mug 2004-01-09 ch 19, anon.	abuse"The students are four. Two boys, three girls. One girl has long blonde hair, one has shorter brown hair, and one has brown hair cut extremely short. The two boys are muscular and large. The girl with blonde hair has apparently decided to celebrate the upcoming Halloween by cramming a pumpkin under her shirt, and the others are touching her artificially distended abdomen." AUGH! I love you! I am laughing my ** off. If that were to happen I would be the happiest little extremely short brown haired girl in the world! Oh the pumpkin. Good times! DAMN GOOD ending, I must say. I LURVE this story (and not just cuz of that line...teehee). And if there is ever a jaguar parked next to my car (which there very well may be), I think I'd have a fit of glee in the parking lot... Grinning like an idiot, ~Shattered
Shattered_Mug 2004-01-09 ch 18, anon.	abuseMy God. The last line is just amazing. The entire chapter is moving as it is! Sorry for the delay...I have failed you! AUGH. Righto, on to the last chappie! snif it's...it's over...tear ~Shattered
Shattered_Mug 2004-01-09 ch 18, anon.	abuseMy god. That last line is amazing. The end of the chapter is just moving, I have to admit. So sad! Must read last chapter! (sorry for the delay, I have failed you oh great one) Heehee. ~Shattered
2004-01-07 ch 19, anon.	abuseM paranoia. Drives people mad, you know... or maybe its just that they were a few fries short of a happy meal to begin with. o.O Whats next for you Kurt? ~S~
mimi6 2004-01-06 ch 19, anon.	abuseoh ilike this 1. very good ending. I hope to read more from you in the future. excellent work
mimi6 2003-12-29 ch 18, anon.	abusewow. that was an heartwrenching moment and chapter. thank you for this story...its increadbly heartwrenching and well done
Saavik 2003-12-22 ch 18, anon.	abuseodd... more soon?
Saavik 2003-12-14 ch 17, anon.	abusevery interesting... more?
Morbid724 2003-12-13 ch 17,	abuseWell...he couldn't just train Susana to go into the hospital and steal the drugs for him? I mean...she'd probably do it, with him playing the sympathiness. "...he far preferred women in elegant, feminine clothing, and this extended even to footwear." Oh doctor, just GIVE IT UP: Susana's not the girly little doll she was when she was little, and Clarice isn't either. "I can just repeat what he told me--he could see what she was BECOMING, she was charming the way a cub is charming, a small cub that will gorw up to be--like one of the big cats, one you can't play with later." (Barney, in Hannibal) I liked the line about the cemetary mink, shows great enthusiasum. I'm starting to think that Clarice has definetly inhereted the Will Graham sixth sense thing while in Behavioral Sciences. Maybe I'm being a little harsh on the GD, he isn't in good shape because of his heart, but I dunno...I guess he shoulda considered that before he convinced Susana to go down to Argentina. If he dies -- Susana's gonna have to face the consequences (and she's partially responsible for it too, don't get me wrong.) I dunno. but DUN DUN DUN. I liked this chappie...nicely written. I bet this story will be having the FBI thinking twice before they let teenagers scan their DNA on field trips... Morbid
Morbid724 2003-11-22 ch 13,	abuse"Susana staggers inside to find the butler there with a crystal glass of chilled fruit juice for her." shifty eyes Thou wouldn't beist takething that with chocolate, wouldest thou? Naughty naughty, jump around like that and the doctor won't give you a lolipop. :] "She is tired and hungry, but she does not want to sleep or eat." MAKE UP YOUR MIND, WOMAN!! Wait...I DID NOT just approve of "make up" did I? color drains out of face GAH!?! aggitated look puts head in hands "In the morning she will see her father, but she will never sleep in this bed again." Heh. Hm...that sounds oddly familiar...hmm...:D Oh boy. How impending doom-ish. Well. If Susana's never gonna be (implied) in that room again, would you at LEAST, for little Morbid over here save her System Of A Down CDS? For me? Please? That's all I ask. Good chappie. :] Morbid

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