stupid virus!! *throws rotten veggies at the virus makers*
It was soo sad and happy at the same time..bitter sweet..alot of the fan fic seems to be heading toward alec/max but i think it'll always be max and logan virus or no virus..this was a great one..made me wanna cry too..*sniffles*

really gripping emotional stuff...

i really felt their pain. its a shame it was ages ago you wrote this... i may have been able to persuade you to write more.

This was great. I haven't seen season 2 and I doubt I ever will since my friend who introduced me to the DVDs won't let me near the second season so I haven't seen the episode with gossamer. I'll just imagine that this was the actual episode. I'm a real sucker for romance. One thing did bug me, though. And it's such a small thing I don't even know why I'm mentioning it but when Max uses the word 'slacks' she sounded like my grandmother. I just haven't heard that word used in a long time. Maybe it's an east coast word but it seems a little outdated for Max.

Wow! Beautiful!

*Climbs up the Space Needle go give Max a hug and a tissue*

Poor Max. Poor Logan. That was really sad. But better than the real ep. At least they "got busy". Very cute.

Very sweet, warm and romantic, but mostly very sad.

very cool...i got mad at that too..gossamer was such a fake looking thing..sliming people and freezing them...it could've been ANYTHING else that took max away from logan besides that pathetic excuse for a mutant...your story was nicely done..all in character and good dialogue..

keep it up

peace
mystic

Aw...*sniff sniff* This ending actually brought tears to my eyes. Stupid virus...grumble...Anyway, I really enjoyed reading this. The episode should have gone this way.

I read the first chapter and I was like, "Hey...that's it? It was mostly lines from the ep, except with a better decision on Max's part." But then I read this half and realized the place you chose to split chapters was a good one, because it keeps the Max/Logan romance encapsulated from the gossamer stuff.

This is tender, and intimate,and I was completely caught up in the mood. Well done.

Just beautiful, but then, you know what I think already. To quote Yoda, though, "Now, things are worse..." for the simple reason that now they know what they are missing out on. Should provide more determination to find the cure.

Naughty labtech for injecting Max with just enough Interferon to produce a temporary cure and then lying about what he did.

Write... more... DAMMIT!

You promised this and I was really looking forward to it.

Really cool that Max sent Joshua away. I wish she'd done it for real.

Now post the next chapter.

Nice, very nice. I love it when that issue is resolved, or worked better. Very masterfully done.

"In a spectacular show of bad timing worthy of Zack himself"

Beautiful, bloody Zack and his timing. Loved that line.

I do so wish BT had happened this way...Max sending Joshua and Alec off to hunt down the gossamer while Max and Logan were getting busy...alas it wasn't the case.

Well...what can I say. You know I like this story. And you also know I like The Calling...

Well done.