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| SonnyAngel 2004-08-23 ch 1,  | abusewow, it's good. It's an interesting mix of characters from past and present L&O's. Hope you continue this. |
| spikes-storm 2004-02-17 ch 1, | abuseAw. So cute. I hope that you write more. CIAO |
| BlueAngel8341 2003-10-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseI enjoyed a different take on the Jack ship. Never thought of him with Abby but I wouldn't mind seeing another chapter of this pairing. Good job overall. |
| Wooffles 2003-09-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseCan't be bothered to sign in. As for the other person that reviewed I think Abbie is MUCH more beautiful than Serena. Actually I don't happen to think Serena's beautiful at all. I guess it's a matter of opinion...though Serena could be awed by Abbie for other reasons too like she actually delivered her lines with some feeling but I digress. I like this story, although I am a J/C lover by nature, Jack and Abbie seems like a newer, fresher pairing. I mean Claire's dead. Even Claire dies fics are getting old to me. I like Abbie better anyways, not necessarily as a girlfriend for Jack but she's starting to win out in that area too. Okay I'll stop ow |
| loco 2003-09-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseok--but abbie is not as beautiful as serena, and i don't think serena would in any way be awed by abby. keep trying--you've almost got it. |