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| Obsidian5 2003-09-06 ch 1,  | abuseWhoa. This was stunning. Incredibly creative story structure and resonant word choice. I am, as always, so impressed by your ability (using so few words) to pick and choose descriptive phrases that have the richest interpretation and the greatest emotional impact. Beautiful. |
| Eolivet 2003-09-05 ch 1, anon. | abusePoetry, m_b, just pure poetry -- you have a gorgeous lyrical style of writing and you evoke so much emotion with your words. Another beautiful read from you -- what a treat! Keep writing!! :) |
| Mariel3 2003-09-04 ch 1, | abuseThis was beautifully lyrical. I'm SO glad you decided to post it. The brief glimpses were sharp and staggeringly poignant. Excellent. Truly excellent. |
| illman 2003-09-03 ch 1, | abuseInteresting choice of style. I really like it. You manage to bring across a lot of emotions in very few words. That takes quite a lot of talent and you did a great job with it! |
| Imjustafan 2003-09-03 ch 1, | abuseThis was so beautiful, sweet, kind...short but full of emotions. |
| Midnight Caller 2003-09-03 ch 1, | abuseThis was so poetic, m_b, what a great rhythm to the writing and a really nice structure, too. You have some really beautiful sentences in here, wonderful writing. Great job!! |
| sheisnotreal 2003-09-03 ch 1, | abuseHoly wow! This is so incredibly beautiful. You convey so much emotion in so few words. It's almost like poetry. I'm very glad you decided to post! |
| gwasshoppa 2003-09-03 ch 1, anon. | abusewow, this is different for you. But the format and style were executed well. I always love a little experimentation from a great writer. Great work. The beginning though, that's the part I like. |
| Forensiphile 2003-09-03 ch 1, | abuseWow, this was WONDERFUL. So, so lovely. You are so talented, and I adore these little glimpses at them. Gorgeous writing. You rock so hard! |