This is so well-written! I absolutely love this, especially the beautiful description in the first paragraph.

This is a really nice fic. The words are just so beautiful. It's also a very nice mix of sad and happy.

That was so beautifully descriptive. The whole thing just seemed like one long flowing poem. I look forward to more writing from you.

T_T Poor Sasuke. Yet, poor Naruto at the same time.

Your last note sounds almost hentai...I think that this fic ended happily enough...

dude, you are way too good with the one-shots. i want more!! its absolutely beautiful of how you write them.

Wowies! Really purdy! Now I must go make chocolate crunchies but I shall send some virtually to thee.

Dude, this fic was perfect! It was exactly the kind of thing I've been looking to read but haven't been able to find! It was wonderfully written, and I loved your Sasuke! This was beautiful!

iie iie! nono.. its very nice! i liked it a lot. so sweet! *melt in a gooey puddle on floor* i hope you write more! *checks out your other fics*

Man, you're a great artist AND a writer ^__^ I can honestly say that your Naruto work pulled me more into the series and into Sasunaru... the first yaoi pair i've liked. EVER. I hope you keep doing what you do despite your various computer problems! I check your site every now and then and will probably continue to do so until you say you'll stop... and even then I'll still visit to reminisce ^_^
Once again I love your work... always a fan!

That was beautiful...it envoked such feelings within me...I feel all sensitive now...Great fic.

Need I say that was a beautiful story? Melancholy is the perfect word to describe it. It was just so beautiful in its sadness... in Sasuke's patient sadness. I espeicially like the Moon and Sasuke comparison. how the cloud goes over his eyes was great and how he was upset that like the moon he is forgotten once the sun comes and a new day starts. Ah...anyway yeah...hope you write more^-^

It gives fanservice, and at the same time, is so sad. How lovely... *_*

Amazing. Amazingamazingamazing. I for one can't seem to find very many good SasuNaru fics. Thank you for this.

Amazing...very very amazing. I'm sorry that my review can't be longer, but I need to catch up on what I've missed...this was spectacular, really. ^_^