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| The Watcher 2008-02-13 ch 8, anon. | abuseFinally got to read this! No Treibflugels or other "paper projects," but who cares? This story was hilarious! I especially liked the "cat fight" between Coulter and Elaine. Oh, by the way, Tony Montana was Cuban; not Italian. In conclusion, please give us more! |
| Danny Barefoot 2004-03-24 ch 8,  | abuseDon't suppose the Republic's quite founded yet...and where will we be in the next story without our wonderful narrator? If it got a bit bogged down in places, this is still good action, and the bits with John West were excellent, best yet. Never really thought you'd killed him off...honest! Mrs Coulter was pretty nasty, and i'd like to see what you do with deamons in the next story. |
| Bard's Soul 2003-10-13 ch 4, | abuseI love the jokes in the 3rd chapter! It's a little choppy though. But you come back full force in Ch. 4! I love the battle descriptions! |
| Ceres Wunderkind 2003-10-08 ch 3, | abuse"that kid who Lyra was shagging" Priceless! |
| FierceDeity666 2003-09-29 ch 2, | abuseExcellent++ |
| Bard's soul 2003-09-14 ch 2, anon. | abuseThere are only two terms I can think of to describe you and your work: "trigger-happy" and "yahoo". But at the same time appealing to the insane (like myself, hehehe), amusing (Dave and Elaine--great writing there!), and incredable battle know-how! I like! |
| Ceres Wunderkind 2003-09-14 ch 2, | abuseJust as funny and irreverent as ever, and I think you're getting better as you go along. Dave Marshall and Lee Scoresby would get along like a house on fire, wouldn't they? :-) Don't stop now, y'hear... |
| Ceres Wunderkind 2003-09-10 ch 1, | abuse"Atomic battery to power! Turbines to speed!" |
| Danny Barefoot 2003-09-06 ch 1, | abuseThat Alt Uni 'Nazi's win' business was just too good to be true, I knew it! Hoping this will come up again, that taster was the best i've seen you write, along with a bit of background to this coup business. Don't get too serious, diologue very good. Next chapter, please! |