You are fixing to probably receive the absolute best review I have ever given.

This story was flawless. Intense.
Quite frankly, the best I've read in such a long time.
I've been looking for weeks for new stuff, (new referring to what I hadn't already read) and this was exactly what I needed.
The way you captured Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship is exactly what I always imagine it being.
A relationship of pure love out of trust, even though that doesn't mean it's all peaches and cream.
I wish I could relate it that well through writing.
I'm finding that can never write as well as what I like to read.
Anyways, I'm beginning to ramble.

Simply put, you are an amazing writer.
I look forward to reading your other works.

,Souzousei

that was fantastic, i don't even know how to describe the insane greatness. seriously, as soon as i finish writing this, its going on my favorites list and i'm going to go sneak around your profile page. :D <3

Greatest One shot ever..it explains there situation so well..

lol 800 applicants and they only want eight. that's not eight percent, it's like around one percent. Hope you got in though.

i just have to say... WOW that was f,ing AWESOME!...

omg i loved it!
plez make another chapter!
i loved when he was lying with her at the end
it was so cute!

Ooh...this is one of the best things of this sort I've read in a while. It just kills me to read all the errors though-is adding periods to the ends of sentences really that hard? Is it really so difficult to use the right version of 'bear' vs. 'bare'? Your writing is wonderful when it isn't flawed by these inane mistakes. I do love the premise, the way you began and ended it, and the dialog. I've read both manga and watched the subbed anime, and I appreciate reading things that convey both of the realities-and it's difficult to find those that focus on the manga at all. And I like to read long one-shots personally. This is just shy of my favorites, and I'm still mulling over that decision.

Oh... ^_^ Extremely kawaii! Love this story, and you are an excellent author. Keep up the good work!

-Neko

the story was very well written and full of emotion. I enjoyed reading it very much. However you spend so much time talking about Kagome and Kikyou and wanting to separate the two that the ending.. where he tells her she's going to have to accept InuYahsa2 and settle for that- well I end up feeling jipped. She fell in love with InuYasha- flaws and all- not some kid in the future who happens to have his soul. It kind of negates Inu's whole speech about trusting Kagome and not Kikyou. What's the point if in his eyes they ARE the same person? (Or at least in his eyes he is the same person as his future reincarnation.)

I love this story so much!
best Inuyasha story of even fanfiction story
I've ever read!God words can't evveln describe
how much I love this!

I like the one-shot a lot. Its depth and realism made it so interesting(: Amazing job!

omg omg omg omg omg omgosh please keep going i realli realli like the storri please keep going..=]

wow...talk about drama!
great one-shot...although i wish there was a sequel...
*puppy dog face

omg, i loved it so much. I think you should like make a sequel, whether a chapter story or a one-shot, but i think you should and then you should like, make inu choose kag! I get wut ur trying to say in the story, but its just not the same...*whimpers*.

Ah this was wonderful! So beautifully written and it certainly did pull at the heart-strings. I had tears running down my cheeks. Thankyou so much for writing such a beautiful story!