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| Mina7 2003-12-09 ch 1, anon. | abuse*sniff* soo romantic. DAMN Yuki for interupting such a moment!! *siff* I do love Yuki, but his sense of time is horid! Lol, Mina *kiss* |
| Isabelle Adamowitz 2003-12-02 ch 1, | abuseHey! I liked this! I really like this description of the end of Furuba and what might come after. Have you read the manga? I don't think it's been published in english yet ( vol 8 is now out in french, and that's how I read it...) I really enjoyed this tho. I'm a bit of a Kyo lover... Keep on writing. toodles P.S. I've added the epilogue to " Hate is a bittersweet thing". Feel free to check it out. |
| Zapenstap 2003-10-12 ch 1, | abuseoh NICE. I liked it. Nice recap of the series with some personal bits thrown in. My favorite part of the history was Kagura's unfair tactics wih martial arts. heh heh. And then the sad monster scene followed by a switch in POV and a lighthearted ending. Beautiful! I love it! PS: thanks for reading my stories too! |
| kireina 2003-09-26 ch 1, anon. | abusewow..i am not a Kyou fan at all but this fic really cought my eye i love it^^ i was so sad at some parts,laughed at the funny parts, i'll say one thing this fic gave me the urge to listen to wisper and watch dvd 4 at the same time if at all possiable^^ this fic is great good job^^ |
| Pisces Panda 2003-09-24 ch 1, | abuseHow is cake and boiling water a symbol? I don't get it... |
| Mizaya 2003-09-11 ch 1, | abuseI am usually prone to like any Kyou-centric fic, but this one is truly excellent. There were so many things here that I was impressed with: Your diction was amazing. I love the "princely merits" line. Also, the part where Kyou was thinking about squirrels in the mountains cracked me up. It was nice to have a touch of humor in there to give the angst more emphasis. Also, I've seen many fics where Kyou thinks about his mother's death, but I've never seen it done so well or in this way. Seriously, I felt like I was in Kyou's head at every instance. None of it seemed OOC to me. The second part with the omniscient pov confused me at first, but after reading your reasoning for making it that way, I am inclined to respect your decision. It definitely works. I think you should do other fics like this for other characters (or just more Kyou ones ^_^) because you really seem to have a good grasp on their emotions. A+ You deserve way more reviews for this! I almost feel bad that you reviewed my comparatively silly fic (Furuba Love Stories). I'm honored to have such nice compliments from a talented author such as yourself! |
| Skittles1 2003-09-06 ch 1, | abuseOh wow, this story was so good!! And the song fit in perfectly!! You did a wonderful job, you're so talented! |
| DarkAngelB 2003-09-05 ch 1, | abuseYou did a wonderful job so don't worry about that you can just worry about maybe making a sequel? *wink wink nudge nudge* |
| Morganeth Taren'drel 2003-09-05 ch 1, | abuseOh that was REALLY beautiful! ^_^ I love Kyo, and I think you portrayed him very well. I love the flash back of his mother, and seeing his mother where Tohru was. It was very well written ^_~ |
| Blushing Sigh (too lazy to ... 2003-09-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseWell done. |
| lilcherrypie 2003-09-04 ch 1, anon. | abusereally really really well written. I love the poem at the beginning! It conveys the mood throughout the story. I loved how it flowed from beginning to end as different things symbolized the end and beginning. Pleez keep writing! |