 Hoppipollamia 2009-12-09 . chapter 1God, I cried so hard when I finished this. It's so sad to hear how Draco thinks and feels. It's total madness but somehow it does make sense. You're such a good writer! |
 Streaming Radiant Fire 2009-09-14 . chapter 1Wow. I don't think I've read anything this amazing before. It took me a while to get use to the fact that what Draco was thinking was also being said out loud, but ohh, I really loved this story. <3
Thanks for posting (: |
 Drarry Queen 2009-09-12 . chapter 1 WOW. This story is...UNBELIVABLE. I can barely describe in words all the emotions that it made me feel. You are en EXCELLENT writer, your use of imagery is quite astounding. I can't tell whether this is a story, or a poem, or both. And that is what makes it so beautiful. Great, GREAT work! |
 Pastiche Pen 2009-08-30 . chapter 1This was totally lovely. I loved the concept, and you executed it perfectly.
Thank you. |
 Nellie 2009-08-29 . chapter 1 Oh god. This made me really stop. I was looking something fast and short to read and started this by only reading the start of the dialogue first and naturally that just didnt make any sense so i had start over and im so glad i did.
Draco was so heartbreaking. To see him in that condition and to feel his twisted world. And at the same time it was so heartbreaking to read about Harry who came every day (or every Tuesday :D) to see Draco and see the pain it was causing him to see Draco in such a state.
Altho i love the ending (i was fearing this to end that one day Harry just stopped coming and Draco was left alone. Im so glad you didnt do that!) it still made me really sad and frustrated. I so wanted Draco to get back to normal even tho i know he wouldnt. I just wish that someday he'll be more present in a real world rather than his own. For Harry's sake. |
 sybayrte 2009-07-30 . chapter 1 Broken draco's muddled stream of consciousness is what anyone else would dismiss as the ramblings of a madman. But it so clearly means something to Draco himself and so Harry doesn't ignore it at all but comes to sit and listen and feel. That's what makes Harry a hero in this story. Not happy but truly a lovely tale. |
 Thumbles 2009-07-28 . chapter 1 Just beautiful. So much love for Harry's promise at the end. And you. Lots of love for you too.
Now if you don't mind, I have to go away and weep happily a little. <=] |
 chasingmornings 2009-06-13 . chapter 1This is so beautifully written, and I really enjoyed reading it. Thank you. 8) |
 MissClaira 2009-05-30 . chapter 1I swore colourfully reading this - I can tell you that.
Everything about this was just so flowing, and poetic, and bloody PERFECT.
I hope to write something like this one day. |
 esther 2008-12-16 . chapter 1 gorgeous, beautiful. truly awesome ^_^ loved it. thank you. |
 Alexa82 2008-11-10 . chapter 1Very Very Good. |
 Flawless Beauti 2008-09-27 . chapter 1I-I am utterly...speechless. That tore me up.
The emotions -anguish? fear? acceptance? I don't know- are just overwhelming.
I honestly don't know what to say. I'm going to re-read this, put it on my favorites, pimp it out to whoever will listen, and hopefully be coherent enough to leave a better review. |
 Flutesong 2008-08-23 . chapter 1 That was incredibly odd, yet moving. I find first person insanity fascinating. Somehow I remember reading the Sebastian part a long time ago, god knows how or where I read it, but I remembered it and now that I see it in the story it makes more sense. This was lovey, weird and touching. Poor Malfoy, poor Harry and what ever comes next for them.
Thank you for sharing this story and your talent. I found this story through Painless' recs |
 AkashaV 2008-06-29 . chapter 1I love how lyrical this story seemed, and how it has what would normally be described as, perhaps, bittersweet, it left me feeling all warm and fluffy. Loved it! :) |
 ScorpionofFire 2008-03-16 . chapter 1I adore this story, but it's almost impossible to read without spaces between paragraphs, or indeed any paragraphs at all. Would you consider fixing this and putting it in a more readable format? Thank you. |