good story
when is chapter 3 out ? ? ? ?

You might want to seperate your lines. The words begin to hurt your eyes. By the way you might want to establish a background.

i loved it, this was great. Micheal was being such a jerk, mono jerk, i just loved the way you ended it,.

please udate...! if you just update you might even get more reviews. this story is GREAT. pretty please with sugar on top update. i was looking forward to see what happens next. if you don't update i will be hurt and angry with you. so PLEASE update SOON...

i like it so far keep writing its good.

great so far! please update quickly!

Update please this is really good

Update please this is really good

Aww that was sweet Maria and Michael are going to get married and Max and Liz are going to get married...it should be a double ceremony or something.

Then they can have a bunch of kids, heh.

This is good, please update soon.