Can´t believe its so long time since anybody have reviewed! Please! Please! Update! I mean it! I have read almost every beyblade-fanfiction worth reading and this one is diffently worth reading!

I was here when you first wrote the story, then I lost interest in beyblade and forgot about it, now however I look forward to reading your next chapter! Please update! I'll call my friends to read your story if you write a new chapter! Please update!

Sequal please! You can't end it now, that would be too stupid. We need to know what is going on!

OOCness is a common problem. I struggle with that as well, but it isn't really that bad in this story. Nice pairings. There is something about this story that just sparks my interest. It is new.

The style is sort of messy and there are a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes, but that will improve with time, I am sure.

Most negative thing: Never ever use author's notes in the middle of a story! It ruins everything! We don't need to hear how insecure you are about this or that fact, or some other comment when we are deep within a good story. Keep your comments to the beginning or the end. Never in the middle!

Please update.

Hurry up and write a sequel. PLEASE!

nope, that didnt suck, but it seemed a lil weird ending it there. anyhoo...

Moony: You know for once Mikomi(you don't wanna know) was right!

Mikomi: I am always right! Only that you are too stupid to take it in your thin head!

Moony: Yeah sure thing. Oh and *reads name again* Mi...e...kkie... Miekkie, boy that's hard! this should continue!

Mikomi: Oh well...please do us a favour and read our fics...PLEASE! You own it to us for our review!

Moony:O.O Mikomi! Don't you mind her. only read if you want to ok?

hahaha LOL @_@ okay first i meet you at DA then i saw you had a ff.net avccount and that yur a beyblade fan! Thats so cool^^
This story was so cool! write more more more ya good at it!
Wanna read mine?
Jen

*laughs* These guys do have a tendency never to do what you want 'em to do, eh? But tha's why we all love 'em. ^-^ Johnny's one of my favorite characters, up there with Tyson and Kane. You could even say he was my first real ~favorite~ in Beyblade. ^-^ Lovely piece! And the thought of Robert bellowing, "NO!" is just plain funny. *giggle*

~Fyredra~

Excellent story! Hurry up'n'write some more--I want a sequal to it! Gimme a sequel NOW!

o__O Don't mind me...I'm just a wee bit hyper right now.

Johnny: Don't we all know it. Don't we all.

Wowie!
Please Please write more that was amazing your a great writer and with such an unlikely yet compatible couple hell Wowie!

Holy . . . great story so far . . . Love it! Plz Continue! Robert/Johnny rules! YEA!