Oh that's a very cool concept. It would be awesome fleshed out. I hope you decide to make it longer at some point. :)

PLEASE ADD MORE TO THIS STORY BECAUSE YOU'RE EXCELLENT AT WRITING IF THIS CHAPPIE IS ANY INDICATION!

oh! please write more :)
i've been away from ff.net so long + now there are lots of lovely stories to catch up on..
will be looking forward to reading more of this..
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Oh! Do write more. I haven't seen this idea yet, and I like your style.