um...im gonna have to agree with the girl who flamed you ya im sorry it started off good but then got kinda weird. it should have taken longer for them to fall in love so ya dont hate me!...im just trying to help...you have potential but this story just didnt quite cut it good luck on any other fics that you right but i liked the plot of this story!

PS- yea crystal and luke were not names people used in middle earth
Layla

loved it

What the HELL?!?!? Patricia, Luke, Crystal, Clarissa are not names even HEARD of in Middle Earth!! Where the hell did you get Narissa? The words 'I love you' in elvish and english appeared way too much and OOC Eowyn and OOC Legolas 'kissed passionately' way too much as well. This sucks. I am sorry, this is a flame, but this really does stink worse than "Loves Oceans".
cybertoodles!(Don't you DARE use this word. It's MINE!)

That was brilliant.. that's all i can say really :)

Great Job,
great job i was very surprised, not many authors could do it like this. keep up the good work!

aw mega cute

I like your story, the battle scenes and everything... you obviously put a lot of effort in this.. I will be watching out for new stories!

I'm done crying now...It's still a beautiful story

It's so cute and a little sad *starts crying then moves to room after receiving strange looks from other occupants of the room*

That was so...sad and short. Wow. Im going to cry now. but it was great. bye

I loved the story! It is so cool! If you did get any flames they are ** so don't listen to them! Kepp up the great wrok and i really loved your story.

^_^krillball6^_^

That's a beautiful story! I really liked reading it. You should write more! Good job.

This was great. I felt sorry for Legolas, he kept getting hurt so many times. But this is good. Sorry for the long wait with reviewing. I was out Saturday, Sunday, Monday, and this morning, so there was not time for me to read this. And I will read more of your stories.

Please keep writing. You DO have talent. (And how else can we inprove our writing if we do not write?)

P.S. Thank you for your wonderful reviews.

Well i thought that the story was very good and i hope that you will make more. I got mad when my computer decieded to shut off and it was at the good part to but then i finally got to read the rest and i loved the ending it even made me cry. So i hope that you will make more stories like this to come.
~Michelle