Extreemly deep.

Again, a wonderfully emotional look at Frodo. He does worm his way into your thoughts, doesn't he? Great gap fillers that stay true to the book.

I've been reading and enjoying several of your stories.They are excellent and I'd have never guessed English wasn't your first language.I wish my German were that good.
I love the way you deal with post quest Frodo's feelings,and fill in the gaps in the book.
I'm adding you to my favourites list.

Oh, I like. Very well done. I particularly like the way you've done the nightmares.

Very nice indeed. I am a Cormallen addict, and this is the best new one I've read for quite a while.

I wish you would both expand this chapter *and* continue the story.

Wow what an amazing 'add-in'! I can see everything so clearly as if it was part of the movie or book! You could just add it in and it would work! I can so easily see Elijah playing that part! It's like having a film in my head!Well done ;)

Really wonderful piece! I loved it how you used the 'endurance beyond hope'. Very nice use of the language too, I wouldn't have thought that you are not a native speaker (English is also my second language). Altogether beautiful and touching! Thanks!

Ah, I love this Frodo-waking-up-meeting-Gandalf scene, since I missed it so much in the book. Your version of it is very much fitting. Will you continue?!

This was wonderful! Won't you please continue with it? I thought your characters were true to the book. I'm looking forward to more of your writings. Lovely piece!

That is one of the most stunning pieces of work I have read in quite a while.
"Desire that he wore around his neck, desire that itched and pained him, desire that had overwhelmed him. Desire that was now gone. And he was gone now, too."
I'm sad that you are not going to continue it.

it's so great what you have going here and I want more..I don't care how..I just want more and it's all your fault that I'm craving more Frodo-angsty *glares playfully*

so beautiful. I wonder what Peter Jackson and Phillpa Boyens will have in store for us. til then we can only hope and wonder and dream...

Oh, this was very well done! I love your writing style. Absolutley beautiful.

Although, at some parts I wanted to cry for Frodo. *cries* Excellent characterization and understanding of what Frodo must have been going through.

Thanks for the wonderful read!