Er... It needs a bit of work. A bit too scrambled for me. I suppose some of my crazier friends would like it. -.-

Jacen: "Looks guys! I found him!" Pikachu glares at Zekk and flips him off.

Zekk: "Hey! Did you just see what that little turd did?"

LMBO! That was my favorite part.

omg-that was so funny! Write more! MORE! I must have looked so funny sitting in front of my computer laughing hysterically...this is the first fanfic I've read that I've actually laughed out loud. Well, not exactly laughed, more like rolled around on the the ground making unnatural squeaking noises. Akia want more! Now! Hurry up you must. Impatient you are making me! Funny that was. Write more now you most definetely MUST!

That wasn't really great...Trust me, I know, there are NO POKEMON IN WISCONSIN, land of cheese and Packers. Nor Jedi Knights. Also, why is Weird Al there?

OH. MY. GOD. That was the FUNNIEST thing I have EVER read in my whole entire life! ROTFLMAO!

hmmm...ash was a little ooc in that fic... i think he would have started screaming "GIMME BACK MY PIKACHU!" or something like that...

That was...interesting. A little on the weird side, but it was a good story line. Try to write something that makes a little more sence. Oh yea...where did Weird Al come from?

LOL! Funny! 2 thumbs up!

LOL! I don't like Pokemon, but I still thought this was frickin' FUNNY! (P.S. I love "Learn To Fly"!)

Weird.