This poem is also very good. I agree you shouldn't give it to your teacher. She might think your suicidel or something.

*Falls over anime style* Wow, girl! This was amazing! I can certainly relate...and that's the sad truth. Wow, I wish I could write amazing poetry like this! But, I'm better at prose than poetry. Oh, well. We can't be good at everything we do. Keep up the great work and I look forward to reading your Yu-Gi-Oh! story!

That was so good, I just loved it. It was really well written and the emotion in it I could identify with.

~*Eva*~

Wow..
This was really really good..
Wonderful images and descriptions..
The metaphor used was fantastic too, it really brought out the point of the poem...
Really meaningful, and thought-provoking..
The sense of angst and pain in the piece was intensifying..
I loved the horrifying descriptions in the piece.. It was so plaintive and so powerful..
Shockin piece of work, it holds emotions and has everythin a good poem needs..
Heartwrenching in its tone, and the sadness hanging between every line really fuelled the feeling in the piece..
The rhyming was so natural, so fluid, it flowed so well and helped maintain a perfect balance it in..

::speechless::

Wonderful work..
I simply loved it..

~Shadafakup

Aside from the praise, I don't see which fanfiction this might actually belong to.. Perhaps you would like to post it on fictionpress.com where it may be more well recieved.. Just a suggestion, because ppl who post poetry here normally write poetry in regard to a particular book/anime/movie or what have you.. I personally place all my poems on fictionpress.com where original work are archived..

God I love your work! Another great poem to add to my wall with credits to you and the source so ppl that I know and want to read it can!! God you are great!

That was absolutly brilliant, very moving and personal, i can relate to it in many ways. It was great. ^_^
hugs green.

That was a great poem. I loved how you used the words. It makes the poem so much stronger and meaningful.

~Citcat~