I don't usually read narrative stories but this one makes me read till the end. I say it's a very good piece of work and yes it's full of emotion. It's a story about love and how it ends tragically. Tragic because it has to end that way. I wished Sendoh doesn't have to die but this part of the story made it more emotional...the regret, the pain, the longing, the sorrow...

Sad stories always make me cry.. hehehe...(why am I laughing? Did I say CRY?)

Thank youfor sharing!

Hope to read more of your masterpiece!

aww-damn, how could i have missed this one out? this is what i call... /angst/ " its good- really... i liked it!

wah! why so much angst.. *sniff sniff*

again.. like all your other fics.. my absolute favourite aspect is how you can 'see' the little things in life and make them so much more meaningful and beautiful.. its like you picked up a flower and 'visualised' it into a garden.. whereas others would visualise a garden and then start collecting flowers.. like moi for instance. haha..

a great writer.. no less. congrats!

beautiful piece of work, really. you outdo yourself everytime. the pain is so evident, so is the guilt and the all-consuming love. when you probe into kaede's mind, you really can't blame him for doing what he did. he was a man, consumed with the passion of irrational anger. too much love made him to irrational things.

in the end, he has to go on living. with the pain that would someday heal or not.

as for akira, it was evident that he loved kaede so much, that in the end, he chose to end his own life when kaede attempted to own his.

sometimes, love hurts so much. yep.

and if i'm the aki-chan you were talking about there, thank you... if not, bap me on the head. i could be such a moron at times.

aki-chan