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| talal 2008-07-22 ch 17,  | abuseincredible story,horrible and terrible in a scary and good sense.one of the best horror stories out there.it could have been better if ash was possessed and there was more pokeshipping |
| moonymonster 2008-07-14 ch 17, | abuseTeam Rocket offers insurance for its minions? And hospitals accept it? Damn, I want in on that mafia. Hell, I can barely get insurance right now and I don't even break the law. All kidding aside, cute story. Could have been a lot creepier, but still, cute. |
| moonymonster 2008-07-14 ch 12, | abuseFavorite chapter yet. I always like this scene, no matter what fandom plays with it--and Brock as the insane maniac sounds awesome. Looking forward to seeing how this plays out. |
| moonymonster 2008-07-14 ch 7, | abuseY'know, considering he turned INTO a ghost in one of the Kanto episodes, it's perfectly reasonable for Ash to believe in ghosts. In fact, the others ought to remember that... |
| moonymonster 2008-07-14 ch 3, | abuseNice. "You won the battle, now here, have this haunted, demonic hotel! I'm off for a vacation!" *snickers* I'm just waiting for REDRUM, man... |
| apprentie Zorba 2008-06-11 ch 17, anon. | abuseWoah woah woah! You had me completely terrified! This is the best horror fiction I've ever read. I swear to you my heart was pounding FAST. I'm glad everything turned out alright. Poor Brock. And James... I really thought he was finished. Thanks a lot for posting! |
| JamesLuver 2008-03-20 ch 16, | abuseGlad James is OK! ^_^ Poor Brock! What's he gonna do now? I'm sure Ash and Misty will save him though! |
| JamesLuver 2008-03-20 ch 15, | abuseOh no! Team Rocket! D: Wow! What a chapter! Brock is one scary freak when he's possessed... D: That was great! |
| JamesLuver 2008-03-20 ch 14, | abuseThat was the scariest bit you've wrote! -whimpers- You keep writing great endings! Scared me senseless! |
| JamesLuver 2008-03-19 ch 13, | abuseI think Brock's drunk. XD And Team Rocket were in it again, so I'm happy! XD; It was well written - great job! |
| JamesLuver 2008-03-19 ch 12, | abuse"Brock looked at her and nodded. He turned, the music of the big band blasting away. The couples were still dancing joyfully, and as Brock began to walk out of the dining room, he glanced into the mirrored reflections of the party. He gasped loudly when he noticed his girl behind him. Her clothes were ragged, torn, and eaten, and she smiled a hideously tooth-less smile. Her once beautiful face was now green and rotted as well, her hair almost completely gone. Brock's heart skipped a beat and his breathing froze. Quickly, he turned on his heels around to her." Now that freaked me out! Blooming scary! That bartender is weird - will Brock listen to him? |
| JamesLuver 2008-03-19 ch 11, | abuseOh dear. That was freaky. That book is creepy! If I was Ash, I would've left that night, even if it had been -100 outside! |
| JamesLuver 2008-03-19 ch 10, | abuseOh crap. Now the curtains are drawing themselves. Brilliant. -shivers- My spine tingled when I read that. It was bloody scary! |
| JamesLuver 2008-03-19 ch 9, | abuseOMG! What did Ash see? Damn, this is one scary hotel! XD |
| JamesLuver 2008-03-19 ch 8, | abuseDon't go in Ash you dipstick! XD; Pikachu should shock him or something. I bet the basement ain't safe either - Brock should be careful! |