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| kissmekent 2005-09-08 ch 13,  | abusecute story. I really liked it. My only problem is the fact that you have Angel out in direct sunlight and not bursting into flames. You did remember that he's still a vampire, right? |
| goddessa39 2004-11-17 ch 13, | abuseI hope you will continue this. Who are her god-daughters? Are they 'Anne's' kids or something? BA ALWAYS! |
| the-faith-less-one 2004-03-20 ch 13, | abuseAH! More, soon! Please?? |
| Druscilla's Doll 2003-12-22 ch 13, anon. | abuseGreat story... one question, where's Spike? lol, sorry obsession. but still, a great story all around, thumbs up girlfriend! |
| WolfDragonDemon 2003-12-14 ch 13, anon. | abusePlease continue |
| Aralain 2003-12-11 ch 13, | abuseAh, see normally I'm all with the pain and guilt being on top, but this is pimpin' |
| FunkyWitchOnFire 2003-12-11 ch 13, | abusecool, keep it up |
| Silver Warrior 2003-12-11 ch 13, | abuseHow sweet. This is a very nice story. Chapters are a little short, but still good. |
| Whisper2AScream 2003-12-11 ch 8, | abuseAnd another problem. This can't have happened. At least not with Angel. With all the goings-on Buffy had with Riley, it would be logical. No go for Spike for the same reason as Angel. Vampires cannot have children. I don't remember what sort of loopholes and plotholes ME jumped through to make Darla pregnant. (Though she was human at the time of conception as I understand it.) But it's under very unique 10 to one circumstances. The only feasible time that Buffy could have become pregnant with Angel's child was during "Remember Me," when he was human again. |
| Whisper2AScream 2003-12-11 ch 7, | abuseAnd it must be a dream. I'm figuring since there's a lot of plot contrivences (sp?) going on. The whole Buffy somehow knowing that the baby's name is Conner issue aside, there's OOC situations going on. (Yes, I know 6th season canon likewise had that problem, but let's be reasonable here.) Now you have Buffy and Angel in a park in the daytime, and he's not a crispy critter (Honeycomb ice cream? That really exists, or more indications of a dream state?)? Either the park's in Pylea, or somebody's dreaming. I'm sorry, but this story definite needs a beta-read. |
| Mi-chan 2003-11-21 ch 11, anon. | abuseQuestion. How is this story a Crossover between Buffy and another series? When does the crossover part start already? If it's not a crossover, then it should be in the plain old Buffy section of the site... I love this story and I hope it stays going for as long as possible. ^_^ |
| the-faith-less-one 2003-11-20 ch 11, | abuseWhat's wrong with her? She has the perfect set up; gorgeous guy and his unbearably adorable baby son whom she has been looking after and fallen in love with! |
| Catlimere 2003-11-10 ch 10, | abuseI like the idea of Buffy being able to play the piano. Very cool and I loved the song at the end. I really liked the mirror to the past, with Buffy commenting on the fact the mansion was still girl unfriendly. Looking forward to more. |
| the-faith-less-one 2003-11-08 ch 9, | abuseI love B/A. Get them back together and then Buffy can adopt Conner and they can live happily ever after. |
| Catlimere 2003-11-07 ch 9, | abuseI like seeing Buffy coming out of her pain. It's not all gone, and boy did she have every right to feel it, but I'm glad to see her finding some happiness again. I love that Lorne can see they belong together. Love that Angel can give Buffy all those things that he wanted her to have. Looking forward to more. :) |