I’m generally a Melanie Walker/Ten fan, I even wrote a Two-Face Story that has her as Two-Face's Lover.

heyy. love it!

I always thought Terry and Ten made a better match than Terry and Dana. I love Batman Beyond and have missed it sorely since it went off the air. This story was really great. Way to go, picking up the story after such a long lapse. The storyline was really well done. I loved how you brought in so many characters. I especially enjoyed the interactions between Terry and Max. The love scenes between Terry and Ten were not what I would have called lemon, perhaps more lemon-scented ;). But they were well done. If you ever write another story, I'd love to be considered for your beta-reader. There were quite a few spelling and grammar mistakes. Had those been fixed it would have been a phenomenal story ;)

Really enjoyed this story! Thanks so much for sharing it with us!


DM

ur right about that bruce is stubborn i wonder what ever did happen to dick grayson it's like he was never heard from again like the ground swallowed him up! amazing u did three chapters have to say they are all good although chapter 21 is my fav.

i have to say i love what you have done with the story it's turning out great keep up the great work thumbs up job well done :)
take care

add a new chapter

I like the improved version so far.

please update soon

I like what you have so far, just try not to take so long between updates, finish the story, and do it in such a way as to not have to write a sequel. You wouldn't want to disappoint your fans by either leaving us hanging or starting a sequel and either taking a long time to write it or not finishing it, now would you? The reason that I am so against sequels on is this. Life gets in the way of writing, as you know, and you don't want a sequel hanging over your head, like this story is currently hanging over your head. Finish the story soon and be sure to tie up any loose ends.

Hey, I just wanted you to know that I adore youre fanfics. I am a big Terry/Ten fan and just love your story which is progressing swimmingly. PLease update soon. I miss Batman Beyond. I wish that they would start the series again. Hoping to see the new chapter soon.

Hello! I feel bad that I've beem out of the loop with this story. When I came in to catch up, I remembered how interesting this was and how well the writing flows. Am becoming hooked with all the drama with Terry. The romantic situations keep changing too...it looks like Terry and Max are becming closer esp since she's the only one who really udnerstands and can definitely be counted on no matter what. Feeling Terry's stress. I'm on edge because Terry's revelation is going to change everything...who knows what will happen after that! Keep up the good work!

Nice.
BOOYEAH!

it's good

it's good