Yay! It finally updated! It was kinda short though... but *shrugs* oh well. Now I'm a little interested in this girl with green eyes. Why? Cuz I'm hoping for a certain spunky ninja girl! We'll see... Anyway, try to have more Soujiro thoughts. Those are the real gold mine! That confusing and small understanding of things... _ In any case, glad to see you updated! Keep it up! I'm rooting for you!

interesting story, plz plz plz if u can, update sooner though.

Wow... even though it was a little short it was already so addicting because your writting matches so well with the actual series. I mean I like it actually was Soujiro who was talking rather than what he could've been saying. As for the next chapters, you might want to go into the theme of the story. You can have Soujiro searching for his answers by wandering or something. It's up to you. But you what or rather who you really gotta have is someone that will help Soujiro find the truth with him. It could be a friend or even a girlfriend *hint hint*. It's also best to go off with someone that people are already familiar with most of the times. That way you don't alienate any of the reviewers.

Side note: I can't believe how few reviews you've been getting for not only this, but your other stories. Maybe if you check out my Soujiro fic and leave a review, I'll do the same for you. *hint hint* A review for a review I always (always being for the past week) say! But it's really up to you. Anyway keep it up! I'm rooting for you!

That was a good one, a good insight to Soujirou's thoughts. You pictured him really well. One thing; that was really, really short. Are you going to continue from here? Maybe you could make it longer the next time. You're rattling on fine. Write some mrore!