I thought this to be quite good. As soon as you can update again, do so, please.

Pretty good...the whole atmosphere of the Potions room was captured well (sorry I'm too tired right now to go into plot but that was good too), and I think I'll, um...ahem...BORROW...the phrase "ivy green eyes", I've never heard it before and I think it fits some of my characters better than "emerald green" (but that's so pretty!) sniff...neway, good job with this! And how come I'm not on your favorite authors list? humph...no jk haha well g2g, keep it up!
~etherealfire~

Hello wonderful author! :)

This is just to let you know that your story is listed in my website "Potions and Snitches", a fanfiction site dedicated to the mentor relationships between Harry Potter and Severus Snape. Please let me know if you want me to take it down, update your info, talk about chocolate frogs, or have any questions. A link to the website is in my profile.

Thank you for your story! :)

Jan

cool, please continue ^_^

i like this story. i hope that you continue it. it is really good

This is pretty good. i like it. I think it might be better if you use a little more detail, it seemed like you were kind of rushing throught the scene

this is an awsome fic, don't put it one hold

GAH!! Say it ain't so!

Well, you have demonstrated that you can operate the spelling- and grammar- checking functions of your word processor, but there really wasn't much point to this story, was there.

You appeared to be developing a plot, but, in fact, your story didn't actually begin until the last set of curliqueues in the second chapter. The preceding chapter and a half amounted to nothing more than pointless drivel. You have no concept of plot development.

Worse yet, your three-sentence denoument (tacked on as an apparent afterthought) only avoids the moniker "footnote" because the type was the same size as the rest of the story.

If you're too lazy to provide any sense of plot development, and you pale at the thought of an ending with more substance than "and they all died, the end," then don't bother picking up your quill.

You'll receive a zero on this assignment. 10 points from whatever house you hail from for wasting my time. (15 points off if you hail from Slytherin; I'll not accept such shoddy work from my own house.)

Interesting, I like how you have Harry acting. Looking forward to the next chapter.

this fics starting of very good. keep going!

Great fic so far. I usually only read the shippy stuff, and SS is my favorite HP character. I happened across this one, and it's written very well so far. Seems like you've got the characters down pat. I can't wait to read the rest of this fic. Keep it coming!