hope you keep it coming im intersted!

o I definatly liked this fic a lot... please write more

i really like your story! it's awesome! i hope you continue it! i wanna know what happens the next day to malfoy and potter! ^_^

Hey,

really good start. Very interesting. Am looking forward to see hw you develop this - hope it doesn't move too fast after the initial leap.

As for the inuendo ... no idea I'm afraid. Obviously too innocent!

Louise

The flirting was nicely done in this fic, not blatant, just obvious enough for Harry (who can be a bit dense sometimes) to get it. I liked how they each seemed to have thought about how the other would behave in a sexual situation. Definitely had a squeal-fest when Draco oh-so-causally cornered Harry against the tub wall.

BTW, it's a bit strange for me to think of Seamus and Harry together, but that bit of info could probably be good for a jealous ex-boyfriend (or not-quite-boyfriend) thing. If you write more to the story, that is.

The kissing and touching was very hot. Well written, with the possible exception of one small bit (when Harry drapes his hands over Draco's shoulders) that could have been a bit more clear. All in all, a very pleasant read and a great start to what could be a very entertaining story. Keep up the good work!

P.S.- The whole 'inserted into the box' comment can be thought of as sexual innuendo, but then, so could the bit in the story about Gregory the Smarmy's head (which one?). I could probably point out a few other ones (yeah, my mind works that way) but I'll resist the temptation.

nice, i like :)

nice, i like :)

*falls over with a loud THUD!*

Dayum! That was...indescribable! All I can say is More more more more more more more!

Amazing!

THAT WAS HOTT!! heheh write more!! write more!! *BOUNCES AROUND THE ROOM* E MORE MORE MORE MORE jesus your slow why havent you writen more?

Ohmygod... that was the coolest I mean I've read alot of short fanfics with harry and draco but that that is the most wonderful thing i've read yet... Please write more its to interesting to be a cliff hanger!

OMG this was awesome! PARKINSON!! WOW I LOVED THAT PART! This is awesome...maybe a sequel? I dunno, plez plez update!

oh very good very kinky i loved it!

only one problem was that there wasnt enough of it!! write more ! more i say!

So harry had something with seamus did he?hmm interesting. maybe he could play the jealous ex?

write more!! can i have a cookie?

OMG! THAT WAS SOO HOT! *cough-cough* DAMM...*drols* erhmn... continue? please!

OOh, steamy. And I'm *not* talking about the bath water, although I'm sure that helped. So Draco had obviously imagined something with Harry before. Can the same be said for our dear clueless Gryffindor hero? Good start. Post more soon!

me guess no but i'll point out a few things...
Pansy lez? cleva
Harry/ Draco (I htink we can all agree and say aw that is really cute)
anyway post some more would ya?