It made me laugh out loud. Land of People Who can Only Speak Broken English. Fantastic. Good twist and how a parody should be done.

I don't know what possessed me to read Zero Wing fanfiction all of a sudden but... LOL. Amusing how Cats, who was practically the mascot for the whole AYB Engrish phenomenon, is the one who can actually speak good English in this story. I liked your twist on it.

This is definitely one of the better Zerowing parodies I've read. There's actually a little description and proper punctuation, which I like muchos. The only problem is that it's just not funny.

This is a special story. I saw the Filter episode where they showed this game a sone of the Top Ten Worst Games. I wrote down all of the insanely awesome broken English quotes. My favorites were "All your base are belong to us!" and "You have no chance to survive make your time.". This game is probably secretly one of the best games of all time... or not. _ By the way, what's a zig?

Hehe... Well written, and that actually made me laugh.

This really made me laugh. While not the most in-depth, it certainly was creative, with an unexpected viewpoint and twist at the end. Heh heh...dude, that was nice. _

I'm afraid that, with a summer college course I'm taking, Jack, I can't talk to you every night. So, why don't you e-mail your ideas, and we'll go from there? Okay with you?

The base! The base! Yes, we must have our base! Begone, foul monster! Ph33r!

Wow, an AYB parody that actually has something original and is funny. Awesome.

Awesome. :) I definitely laughed. He! Good work!

This... this is good. In fact, amusing. Keep up such excellent work.