Wow. That was great! :)

This is so beautiful and raunchy at the same time :O I love it!

nice one shot! I like your stories!

Beautiful WE story. I found myself captured in it. :3

I've been smilling from ear to ear from start to finish. I loved it. :)

cute!

I know I reviewed the original, but this improved version is much better. You must've gone back and been very disappointed by the results. Congratulations.

:D Just what I need to find within all this Jack/Elizabeth madness. I loved it!

at first, I thought that Elizabeth was disgusted by his rough hands and that she felt like he had taken advantage of her. But, now I know that that's not exactly what she was thinking. Pretty good ficlet!

make more chapters

I absolutely loved it. It was amazing.

I am in love with this.

'nother great fic. :D

ur a great writer!! Really and truelly!

I was abit confused there.. i got the impression at the beginning that Elizabeth didn't like Will..obviously that changed by the end. You caught their personalities, Elizabeth's at least, quite well...

Wholly Hotness!

Descriptive and realistic. That was ... almost as amazing for me as it was for Mr and Mrs Turner. Wink