Whoa. You describe everything so perfectly and so eloquently. It must be awful being Pansy, I can almost imagine it and the lack of affection that comes with it. Very difficult.

Love your portrayl of Lucius as well.

Looking forward to chappy three ;)

Mel

Absolutely brilliant.. can't say more than that.

update...its awesome. I love your story. it shows emotions very nicely.

Very good. Not sure I have much else to comment on. Great description, blahblahblah, ...

Thank you, Go on.

lets see...hated it vs loved it *pretends to think* hm... *blinks at author* do you even have to ask? I loved it as I did the other one! very very very nicely done. beautifully portrayed...loved the bit about the engorgio charm...but very nicely written, very lovely.

Hm, well at least she finds Lucius attractive. I like Narcissa even more in this chapter. I don't exactly know why, but I do. Lucius seems to contradict himself. He said that he only wants her to produce an heir and then get out of his life and that he probably won't like her, but from the way he kissed her, it seems as if he is attracted to her and might actually want her around for a while. I wonder if Narcissa will fall in love for Lucius. He seems like someone she could be attracted to and hate at the same time, but I think their relationship shows a little bit of promise. After all they had some good conversation, except for that whole list of expectations for a Malfoy. Anyway, very interesting chapter. I hope to read more soon.

It's well written, but it's gallEons not gallons.

o funfunfun! moremoremore! soon? i like, i like! love how you portray her, not some whiney brat or anything...keep going!

I think this is excellent so far. Keep it up!

Hi Leuca:

This was a great start. You have a nice voice for Narcissa- she isn't being whiney and "oh poor me" but she has realistic rebellion to the thoughts of what is going to happen to her.

I do wish that she could love Lucius though *wistful sigh*

-Kiri

You should keep going. I like stories that show Narcissa from this angle... I've always thought that she could never be truly happy, just frozen.

Wow..

What an ice queen..

Wonderful nonetheless..

Write more son!

*Ally

I like your fic so far. I wonder if she'll like Lucius. I hope so because I feel sorry for her. I wouldn't want to ever have an arranged marriage. Keep going. I like this so far.

MORE! Oh, please let this be a happy arranged marriage, like they meet, fall in love,but not realize that it's to eachother that they're betrothed untill after they fell in love with eachother. Or at least make them LIKE each other! (yeah, yeah, i'm a Lucius/Narcissa fan)

I think you should go on with it. Its really good so far :D