  MillionMoments 2006-04-09 . chapter 12This was a great fic. Once I started it I couldn't stop...meaning it's now a tad past my bedtime! |
| oliviatocali 2005-11-02 . chapter 12 Oh my goodness, that was so beautiful and funny...it gives me chills... |
| Bruce Wayne 2005-09-26 . chapter 6 I really do like your ideas, but you seriously need to do a grammer and spelling check. You've made the same errors with some of the simplest words such as 'yha' it's either 'yah' or 'yeah.' I don't mean to sound really anal or anything, but it is really annoying to see such poor spelling and takes away from your story. |
| Tanya Reed 2004-01-09 . chapter 12 I just finished your story "Hair in Her Eyes" and I really enjoyed it. You seem to have about the same ideas as I do concerning the Meg/Ben relationship. Good stuff! I've written a couple of Meg/Ben stories myself. If you think you might like to read them, you can find them at tanya.flickguy.com/ex.htm The Meg/Ben centred ones are: Blue Eyes Crying in the Rain, The Viewing, Rage, Weakness (the Rage sequel, two of my favorite stories), I Always Liked the Rain, Dancing to No Music (my other favorite), and Frannie's Lament (but you might not want to read that one because it's so long, I haven't had a chance to put the whole thing on there yet.) Anyway, if you do read my stories, I hope you like them. Drop me a line if you like. Do you have any more DS stories? |
| Catherine 2003-10-16 . chapter 12 Cool!! TYK! Don't suppose you are planning a sequel?! |
| Catherine 2003-10-10 . chapter 11 Wow!! Thank you!! Now about this epilogue thing...?! |
| Snuffles 2003-10-04 . chapter 11 Wow... |
| Snuffles 2003-09-30 . chapter 10 Honestly, the best chapter yet. I love the humor between Fraser and Ray. Keep up the good work! |
| Snuffles 2003-09-28 . chapter 9 oh...the guy that kidnapped Meg sounds like a real weirdo... I Like It!! He's creepy...^_^ |
| Snuffles 2003-09-27 . chapter 8 Keep it comin'! ^_^ |
| rubi 2003-09-25 . chapter 8 I think i have figured out exactly what it is I love so much about this story, perfect characterization, and great narration. I love your attention to detail, it truely enhances the story. I can quite clearly picture everything that is happening. |
| wwsowl 2003-09-23 . chapter 7 really nice story, I love it! Please continue! |
| rubi 2003-09-23 . chapter 7 I can't wait for the next chapter!! |
| Snuffles 2003-09-22 . chapter 7 BRAVO!! *cheers* Keep posting!! Great story! |
| Catherine 2003-09-21 . chapter 1 Aww..please keep writing this fic!! Non-slash DS fic is really hard to find these days - especially with Meg/Ben pairing! (my personal fav!). I love this fic! TYK!! |
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