This is cool! Keep it up!

no effence but worst story ever like omg drew barrymore and benifer like omg gay gay gay gay gay

awesome story

Thats such a great ending! Nice Work

haha! that was funny! and y did i have sugur in my poket? hmm...of well! nice ending!
later days!

OH! BUMP POKE!
I can't believe it's over...
WAH!

dude should get into a fight...shE's more like that...tough ish...starfish is tOO nice -*

*laughs insanely* OMG! This is so funny!

hahaha that was funny! but y did u end it? i was having fun w/ this story! o and guess wat? i'm almost done w/ my chapter! it should b up in a few days or so!
later days!

HAHA!
BUMP POKE!

ahahahahaha! funny!
ahahaha! yeah i like this chapter and my victory dance but i don't like disco but w/e! as long as i got 2 party! oh yeah grand ma!
bye!

lol. The Wizard of Oz rocks _. I'm probally gonna end up watching it now...
Nice work.

a/n:
the wizard of oz! YAY! if u haven't seen that, u have had a deprived childhood.
It was on tv a few hrs ago... I SAW IT B4! I have had a good childhood, thnks. lol BUMP POKE!

that was really cool. as you know, it was not lame. very romantic! (love it!)

revenge is definitely sweet, and that was some of the sweetest revenge ever. am i really that obsessed with shakespeare? if so, im really sorry, well maybe not REALLY sorry, but im kinda sorry. anyway, beautiful chapter. i am quite excited for the coming chapters. i love big words - even if mr. morrissey doesnt.